This is such a good fanfiction i know its a few years too late but please if you can finish it I would like to know what happens
Your a very skilled writer and i hope you can finish this fanfic

I gotta say that Bacon is an amazing surname.

-Stares forlornly at update date-

I guess this has been abandoned despite your promise of another chapter? Its such a shame. I was truely enjoying this :( There are so few well written and well executed mpreg fics in this fandom, and this is one of the best of this particular trope that ive come across in FMA (believe me, ive been a writer/reader for about 9 years now, i know)

But alas, i guess all good things must come to an end. Even if a premature one. I hope one day you might suddenly be overcome with the desire to continue this though, and if you do, kudos, i know I'll be all over it and happy for it. :)

I don't know if you're still writing fics, but if you are, please work on this one again? PLEASE!?

sad to see this at its end so to speak.. I was rather enjoying it. good job.

IM IN TEARS WHAT A STORY!
Please don't tell me you abandoned it? :-((

gggaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
will you update?

WOAH! THIS IS HE BEST ROYED MPREG FIC THAT I HAVE EVER READ...AND... :( ... LAST UPDATE IS IN 2007... NOT GOOD... NOT GOOD.

This is the best roy/ed mpreg fic ever. I know it's been a while since an update but wanted to say that you still have readers who love it and are hopefully about it coming back again eventually

...what will happen next? dundunda!

This story, so far, is so incredibly fantadtic-! I have loved pretty much every second, even with being utterly confused by Ed's reaction/anger at Roy. This has been such a unique idea and follow-through that I sincerely hope our beloved author still has the ability to see it to the end. Especially now that some more interesting points have come in, with Roy's family and Havoc's eavesdropping.

And the unanswered, unaddressed question: what attacked Al, and why?

I also, of course, have the sneaking suspicion that the Al-voice in Ed's head is more than just his subconscious. The same idea kind of went for Maes...

And I may have forgotten to mention that another reason I'm so fond of this story is because of the sentence structures! The proper grammar! Spelling! Dear god, is it hard to find good quality stories-especially when one is looking to read something like mpreg.

XD I can just imagine Ed foaming at the mouth, his eyes rolling up to the back of his head and him falling off the seat! And so the bomb is dropped. Yay!

Awwww...no lemon scene...oh well :p

Pain in his abdomen? What could that possibly mean?... *smiles* hehehe...

...si...twas good :3 though sad...