Good job on this story.

eloo i thought that ur story was g8t i relay want it 2 carry on plz!i also wanna find out hoo gets kai? in abslutly luv TalaKai but this storie was amazing!

I vote mpreg. Love mpreg, but only if kai is the pregnant one. There we go my vote.

Anyway please please please please ...please update.

You havent updated in months.

Hope you do

:-)

I'm not going to stop reading your story because you put mpreg in it, but I like the way things are going now. That just complicates things. :] Kudos for giving readers an explanation, you're a great author for doing that.

this is amazing i love reading this story i hope you update it.

first i wanna say I LOVE THE STORY! winging it apparently worked pretty good for you! and your grammar is good to so no need to worry about that. about mpreg, it is kinda difficult to write that convincing, but it shure is funny! do you really have to start from chap 1? cause i really really wanna know what's gonna happen next! whatever you do, keep writing :)

I vote for no mpreg. There's enough of them already out there and I don't really think this story needs it. Can't wait to see the rewrite!

I must first say that I love this story.

However, I would prefer that you not turn this fic into a mpreg. This is mainly due to two reasons, firstly the fact that despite all good intentions, mpreg tends to evolve into the main plot and the origional plot seems to fade into the background.

And secondly, most explanations on how the mpreg was possible are flimsy at best.

I will still continue to read this story if it does turn into mpreg, ut please keep in mind what I have said and attempt to compensate.

Thanks for listening to my rant, please take it as it is meant to be (as well meaning advice, and not flames), and write this story as you feel is best.

Thanks

Orphen Chica

God! it's kawai! oh... what will be tala's reaction! nah he's a jack ass in this story (but i like him) to bad for him he let kai go... anyway can't wait!

AW! I am really enjoying this story...as you don't really come across MichaelxKai stories, and i personally don't really find them that interesting...but i think you've just swayed my opinion! _

I think that the whole m-preg thing is absolutely perfect for this story, and anyone who has a problem with it is &$?"&($(&£%!&*£&! hehehe! lol! however, i'm seriously looking forward to who the father will be...Tala? or Michael?

Please don't keep everyone enjoying the brilliance of your story waiting! If you need any help...feel free to ask anyone, because i'm sure they would love to.

Anyway...looking forward to the next chappie!

~Sweet Mitsukai

Are you going to put Kai and Tala back together? They seemed like a sweet couple. Though I guess you can't blame Kai for leaving Tala after what he did to him, and you wouldn't have much of a story if you made Tala choose Kai...Anyway, I love you story. You really must write more.

This is really good. Update soon.

woow that's was a good chapter! now Kai and Michael are a couple that's so awesome but I feel sorry for Tala...well sort of I hope Kai and Tala come together to be a couple again.

Hello! me again sorry bout yellin 2day i was a bit cranky! anyway nice chappie lookin 4ward 2 seeing more!

hm...but i dont like mpreg and i lvoe this story! **pouts** sorry. um Kai was kinda wimpy in this chappie! ;