hauntingly beautiful story. i love your characterization of both gene and finny; and your writing style is so wonderfully elegant and poised—i really loved everything about this.

this was so good...

This is AMAZING, seriously. Thank you so much for writing this.

-taida

Damn. This is amazing. The last four nearly killed me...just so tragic. But it flows perfectly and is very canon in its darkness. Just wow. Your writing is superb.

Wow! I don't think there are any words to describe how amazing this story is. It sounds like these could be the exact things that went on between the lines. Great job!

i just have to say that this story was absolutely brilliant...it's spectacularly written (seriously..it's an awesome idea and follows the main points and all..wow)and you have a great writing style too...really gets u sniffing *sniff*

hope you keep writing! _

I really, really love this. We get to follow the story, and it's as canon as can be, which, as depressing as the actual story is, works really well. I loved it. You did this so perfectly, I wish there was a continuation. Heh.

that's me

ahhelga

aka Pauline

Oh wow. That was absolutely amazing. It was beautiful and horribly tragic, but I loved every word. Perfect.

WAUGH.

So I reread A Separate Peace for the first time since I was twelve. Immediately afterward, I get online and said to Twitch, "OH MY GOD, THAT BOOK IS SO QUEER." And she follows up with, "Aye wrote a Gene/Finny fic once." And links me.

Then I die of happiness.

Aye, this was A. MA. ZING. Seriously. You are brilliant. This is perfectly in the style of the book, but also unfailingly in YOUR style. It is also smart, sad, and inexplicably hot. [Seriously, man. You have THREE PARAGRAPHS of not-remotely-specific sex, and yet it is HOT AS HELL. Fuck.]

This is kind of perfect. I would italicise shit, but a. I would be italicising everything, and b. ff.n won't let me. Suffice it to say: HAVE ALL MY BABIES. 8U

BRILLIANT! I loved it!

Oh my. I read this on LiveJournal a bit ago, and loved it, and it is just as brilliant as I remembered. Especially liked 18 and 20. Amazing. I'm actually having trouble finding words.

This was amazing. I loved it all, especially the actual feeling and idea behind it that's so rare in fan fiction. Gorgeous style. Its been a while since I read the book but it seemed in the same sort of style, like this was what was almost written. It quite literally took my breath away.

wow. this is amazing. so perfectly strung together, beautiful, and breath taking. wonderfully written. so wonderful, i'm writing a review in silly choppy sentences. this is divine.

Heartbreakingly Beautiful.

-FWG

that was beautiful.

i love the way you divided each section, and i loved your characterization and your writting style... and everything!

thank you for being an amazing writer!

*Alice