this was really cute

Not logged in. Wow. **swoons** amazing.

Beautiful

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Great story! I think this fits ShikaIno really well:)

Wow!

I really love this!
I find myself imagining Shikamaru being eloquent and passionate with this thoughts~

More ShikaIno, please!

This was great! I loved every bit oft. Good job.

You are a favorite author of mine. Every story you've written I've always adored and I was always left with the desire to read anything you've written. Recently, it has especially been about this particular pairing.

You delve beneath and pull out more of the characters. I can see this being Shika, especially with Ino. There is just some sort of bond and chemistry between these two that has me catching my breath and you've brought it all to life. Especially here, because despite how lazy Shika is, when he goes for something he puts his everything into it. When he's in the moment he is intense and a force to be reckoned.

You just brought him alive in a way I have yet to see many others write. And I dare not believe I could pull off half the justice you do to him and his and Ino's relationship.

I adore this and I thank you. I don't know if you're around or writing anymore, but I just wanted to say you are awesome and I thank you for what you've given us.

Oh gosh! this is so good!

I loved it...the end almost made me cry.

Gosh, I really like this story! I love your writing style!

Wow... This is just... Just sO beautiful . I will go and read your other works!

Awe, I loved this story oh so much! It was so cute, and sweet! Amazing job, luv!

-A

Brief; poignant emotional descriptions. Straight to the point. This deserves its 100th review.

Awwww..this is so sweet. Real love does lie in subtlety. Actions peak louder than words. Nice!