Good ending. At first it seemed a tad abrupt, but now that I think of it, what else could she do? Poor Rebecca. No one believed her, but she didn't lose her mettle. Good story.

I actually felt a jolt of adrenaline when she ran into Jackson in the shop. Wonderful storytelling!

You leave a big opportunity for a sequel, dear, although I wouldn't suggest it. It might be tough to carry a plot between a grown man and a child, especially from the child's point of view. It's likely to devolve into her just being scared for her life all the time.

Anyways, good end to a great story. It was all believable, except maybe Jackson's acceptance of defeat in the end. Only critique is your spelling of "thrawted" (thwarted) 3

Bravo!

Excellent ending! It was great the way Rebecca sympathized with Lisa. Go Rebecca! Way to take down Jackson! :)

You do a really good job of making me feel frustrated with her that no one believes her just because she's a little girl. Grr... stupid security guard.

Lol awesome plan, Rebecca. Until he catches onto you and gets pissed.

Anyways, I like how you toned Rebecca down a little more and made her deeper at the same time. You changed her speech to suit her age level more and therefore made her much more believable. Brava.

I'm still here.

Awesome chapter! Poor Rebecca, no one's believing her! That's a disadvantage of being young-no one believes you! Please update soon! :)

Interesting concept, Lisa being suspected for the attempted Keefe assasination. And it's plausible too. She did arrange for him to be moved after all. Jackson coming back to the airport at the same time as her. Creepy... I wonder if he'll recognize her as the one who pushed the bag out in front of him. Please update soon!

Well, I think it's an awesome concept, finally getting the storyline off Lisa for a while. While it's a bit of a stretch to imagine Rippner worrying himself over getting back at a little girl, I'll certainly let it slide for want of a really new plotline.

Then again, it could just be coincidence they're on the same flight. But coincidences like that are really tough to come by. XD

Anyway, I love it so far and can't wait for more! It's really fantastic writing as well, although Rebecca seems to be a bit too well-versed in worldly matters for an 11-year-old. This makes her character a little less believable, so I'd advise you to be careful with her thought process. Remember, there's a HUGE difference between the way an adolescent girl and a mature woman would react to a situation, especially to the one Rebecca's about to be in.

Wonderfl concept! I'll give a full review after I've read the second chapter. I'm too excited to do it now!

Awesome chapter! Rebecca's smart, so she can find a way to get Jackson to the police. Right? I sure hope so... Please update soon! :)

Interesting and original plot. Please update soon.

Intriguing beginning! I'm looking forward to reading what happens next. It was a nice change to see Rebecca's thoughts. She seemed to be the only person on the red eye flight that noticed anything odd between Lisa and Jackson. Please update soon! :)

Great idea for the story plot! Good writing style and a nice touch making the first chapter a narrative of her role in the movie. I can't wait for the future chapters! Keep on at it!