Good grief, I hadn't thought it was possible to be much more intense than the novel was in the corresponding section, but you've just proven me wrong.

Oh my gosh, I hate you.

Let's review the whole fic, will you? Well, even if you don't want to, you'll have to bear it.

I loved it. And I hated it, for I shivered at each of your cruelties against Dalamar or Raistlin, I dreaded the tension, the sheer horror of the Nightmare you designed for them ; I was on the edge of any seat I was on each time, and hated the way it grated my very nerves.

But yeah, I loved it, so said I. Because of that. And well... You have talent in writing, your descriptions are smooth, fluid and full of an imagery which makes me envious. I love to discover them again, too see the characters I learnt to love anew, and well, I should stop for I could keep on blabbering all night long. And I should be sleeping already.

Thanks, so, and good night, see ya on the next one!

Nuitari Aquarius

This is so exciting. I must read the next story immediately, I cant wait!

Splendid story, as always.

Oh no! How awful! I must read more!

i really like it...but i think that dalamar should find out from someone else...maybe writing b/c this is one of the best fanfics ive read

Woah. That's a punch to the gut ending right there. Fistandantilus is spectacularly evil isn't he?

In all seriousness, this was an incredibly solid chapter. Evocative interesting surprising. Bravo!

Oh my ! My hatred toward Fistandantilus (or whatever his name, I can never seem to get it right) is increasing every minute. How dare he stand between our two lovers ! Gargl !

You gave to this episode such an intensity it made me shiver.

I just finished reading this chapter and I hate the old undead with such a flame it could burn Palanthas to ashes.

Oh god ! You make me hate the old lich with such fury ! Poor Dalamar, seeing his lover being eaten in front of him.

I like the fact that in Dalamar's mind the voice of calm is Raistlin's.

A very heartbreaking chapter. I need to read what follows now.

My, my, a chapter full of surprises, it's true that we see that elves are prone to slavery with the other elves that lived in Ergoth, but applying it to Dalamar and making him see it is very clever.

I also like to see that Dalamar is noticing Raistlin is sometime not quite himself. I wonder where this will lead us.

That's a wonderfully beautiful moment you offered us between Raistlin and Dalamar, I was moved to tears.

For a brief moment I thught you meant to turn the story far away from the books by making the group not go into Silvanesti. But it's far more dramatic for Dalamar to see what happened to his country.

A very good beginning, the travel to Tarsis takes an whole new meaning and will surely be much more interesting.

Hey Skull Bearer I just wanted to know which stories and chapters have been changed, so I can get re-reading. :) Have you also changed your fics at to?

Keep up the great work! ;)

Love,

ksha2

*cowers in fear at the thought of what Raistlin will do to Fistandantilus when this is over* Wonderful writting, although it seemed you didn't quite make Tanis put himself in him place as much as you have before... Keep up the excelent work, love your stories.

Aw man... that was really intense. I wanted to believe that the two of them would make it out of there together, though I understand why it happened the way it did. I can't even imagine how the sea elves are going to treat Dalamar or the others for that matter now that Raistlin is no longer with them. I wanted to cry when I read that last little bit, my mouth dropped open... also because I'm dying to know what happens next. What will they do? How it will change the course of the story? So many unanswered questions... Take your time in starting the new one if you need, I look forward to it.

Oh, how evil an ending. I wouldn't want it an other way. I'm looking forward to the next installment, especially after a conclusion like that. _