awesome

I DEMAND A SEQUEL! lol. Awesome story and awesome ending. Shame Peach had to lose her memory. Good work! ;)

'OLY CRAP! WICKED!

Great Sequel! Loved the first one too!

But uh, I'm reviewing a long time after this story was completed and haven't seen the last/first instalaion of the trilogy, did I miss it or does it not exist?

If it does, hope to read it soon!

Later!

Amazing!Dude, you have inspired me to keep writing my koopa private eye .

Wow! Great Story!

Hope you put up part two soon!

Just promise me one thing...

REVIEW MY FIC! ...Pretty Please?

Keep it up!

~Deanna625~

My gods, after having read the entire trilogy in one sitting, I dare say you are the first Author to have been able to do such a thing. Not even my love of the Legend of Dragoon series had me reading this much at one time...and to you, I take off my hat, a very rare thing indeed, though it probably means little to someone who does not know me.

Instead, I will leave you with this review.

From the beginning, you had me entranced with the storyline, one I have tackled to read before at the hands of other authors, and all had failed to hold my interest. When you introduced young Bowser, I could just imagine to myself what he must have looked like as a regular, every day Koopa.

When he recieved his new Shell from Kamilla, I was able to envision the same average Koopa with that spiked shell most have come to know and loathe, while I on the other hand was spellbound as the story continued with his growth into a rebel fighter. The battle of Mushroom Castle was indeed well thought out, and the horror of watching one's sibling die was one I was able to connect with, not wishing to explain the circumstances at the moment.

When Wart was finally defeated, I gave an inner shout of triumph for the Koopa clan, as it had indeed been a major victory for the shelled reptilians, though at the loss of both Bowser's brother and sister, a sad tragedy indeed.

As the Kingdom was won by Bowser Koopa, and the war came crashing to an immediate halt with the instatement of the Hammer Brothers of Koopa, I could just see the castle reveling in the aftermath of the battle as the power of the Stars washed away the bloodshed.

When the Princess came and became captive, I could barely contain my excitement as chapter by chapter unfolded, Bowser slowly gaining Peach's trust as she saw what had truly happened, and how she was related to Bowser. And as Mario showed up, doing what he does best by mucking up Bowser's plans, I felt myself begin to loathe the same plumber icon that so many have come to love in reverse effect to Bowser's truthful popularity.

With each star collected, I felt my animosity towards him growing as Bowser slowly pulled himself apart, trying to conjure a way to stop Mario, which in turn only helped him even more towards his goal of defeating the reptilian king. When the Star Storm came about and began to devour the castle, I found myself cursing the Stars themselves, also aiding the red and blue clad wolf in sheep's clothing, devil disguised as a savior. When the final battle came about, I was literally on the edge of my seat while you switched out between both Bowser and Peach's perspectives while the world they knew seemingly collapsed down around both of them.

When Bowser came so close to victory, only to fall victim to his own destructive power's aftermath, I could barely keep myself from finishing the story at a slow pace, so as to read and coerce my mind into envisioning it all as it happened. But the REAL shock came to me when you set up Bowser back at his home in Koopa Keep, prgressively making way for either the Original Game, or the Super Mario World series, both of which could easily be taken into account as the next chapter in a very good set of grandly written fiction.

My congratulations to you, LemonyShepard, A.K.A. Steve from Detroit...May you keep ficting and never leave a story unfinished!

10/10 Rating on the King of the Koopa Series for a grand storyline and skills in writing beyond comprehension!

-Laegreffon Damarius Laizare-

A.K.A. Steve From Cleona PA.

Aww, how cute. Peach still loves Bowser, even though she doesn't really remember him. And ending the story with "defying gravity"! I love it! Can't wait for "Something Wicked"! I bet I'll love that one too!

Peace out,

The Great Yoshi Rider

oh, yup , this story is definetly in the right catagory.

I think this stroy is really good. It is almost like 2 teenagers. They say they hate each other , but on the inside they love each other like siblings. (or more in some cases.)

I like how you ended the story. Most authors would have ended it with the two kissing (eww). Only 1 complaint, I think Bowser was a little too ... careing (?) in some scenes; but hey, that's what romance stories are for right?

wow. That was a good (there needs to be a better word for good) way to end it, (i knew that you couldnt kill bowser).

I (not so) patiently await your next story.

aww, that was such a good ending! ive never seen wicked..yet, but i hope to soon. you are such a good writer, so you can be sure that our paths will cross again, because i will most definitely be reading your next story! happy writing...or typing!

Queen B ;)

I really liked all of the subtle things in this chapter. You know, the cake (which was obviously made for Bowser), the Koopa Kids (which are apparently Brank's), and the reference to Paper Mario (with the whole 'Star Rod' thing). I can't wait for the next one!

P.S. Thank you for the high complement you gave me at the beginning of this chapter ;).

So Bowser didn't die? Yay! Back in his old house, with his old mentor and his old vehicle... and his good old methods of kidnapping. Poor Peach -but between Bowser and Mario, she always turns out fine in the end. The ending to this story was fantastic (as was the rest), and I'll be very happy when the next one is published!

And so ends another part of the tale... Great job dude. Can't wait for the next one. Until then, I'll be waitimg.

~Gijinka Renamon~

its so sad. he died. mario won. bowser failed every one he loved. i hope peach stays alive though. it would be so sad for her to die. please continue this is a challenge. make an origin story for Tatanga from super mario land. please complete this you dont know who Tatanga is go to and search for Tatanga.