| Reviews for If You Can Help Her |
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   OzwaldPendragon chapter 50 . 7/13 I really like this story and I hope that you follow up with a second story to tell what happens later on. |
| obvsHiNnY chapter 1 . 6/24 TiTlE rEfrEnCe |
| Wolfinmystic4 chapter 1 . 6/13 Awesome story But Neville and Luna shouldn't have died |
| Guest chapter 27 . 5/29 At that moment... Molly realized... That she really screwed up. |
| Spidersauce chapter 8 . 5/16 And Harry just stood there and let himself be cursed without even an attempt to defend himself. This is becoming something of a recurring theme in your storyHarry is strangely pathetic. Even moreso than canon. Says Ginny has nothing to apologize for? Despite Hermione trying to force her opinion on Harry, Ginny was entirely at fault there. Harry did literally nothing wrong. It is up to Ginny to recognize her mistakes and make amendsand if I wad Harry I wouldn't even continue dating. Not listening to you at all, screaming at you, attacking you? That is not a healthy relationship. |
| Spidersauce chapter 3 . 5/16 Harry just stood still and let them take his cloak . . . ? How stupid. |
| Spidersauce chapter 2 . 5/16 Everytime a character is written as shouting randomly, like you had Harry shout "What do you want, Malfoy?", it always reads to me like Naruto screwing his face up and shouting exaggeratedly when everyone else is talking at a normal volume. People rarely shout, or yell, etc., and Harry does even less until fifth year. Not sure why so many fanfic authors make their characters do so so often. |
| Spidersauce chapter 1 . 5/16 Eh, not kissing too young at all. "Kissing pationately" too young, perhaps. |
| Epeefencer chapter 25 . 4/26 I never liked that Harry was forced to a minor there is no way he should have been able to sign or commit to the binding contract without approval. |
| Epeefencer chapter 1 . 4/22 If McGonagall saw Hermione curse Ron, there was no way she wouldn't have noticed the way Ron was acting and about to attack Harry. |
| D.J. Scales chapter 1 . 4/10 Well that right there was a nice opening chapter. |
| X.pix.X chapter 50 . 1/4 Amazing story, I’ve enjoyed it very much |
| Guest chapter 7 . 11/30/2019 Cj |
| Skullduggery05 chapter 9 . 9/17/2019 So I’m on chapter 9 and I read Ginny speaking parseltongue and thought you could have funny and Harry speaking in parseltongue I know it’s a bit late but it can hopefully help on later stories this has been an amazing read so far thanks for writing it can’t wait to read more |
| Angel the Wizard chapter 37 . 9/5/2019 Great chapter and I liked how the two rescuers forced Voldemort to retreat. Shall read more later. Can't wait until I continue :) |
