you better be fucking go to your mama's ass ! you suck. . You better give me another pc coz i fucking vomited on it . you fucking faggot. better throw away your works to trash. it suits in garbage bag. now, get a life fucking double D. douchebag dumbass. :P

This can serve as useful tips to new ff writers. It was also a really original plot. Very interesting. I found myself thinking that I would like it better if it followed the OC a little more on her journey multiple times, but I liked it a lot overall :)

Nah, don't delete the old stories. You certainly don't have to post them, just don't delete them. Keep them as a reminder of how far you've come, when you get discouraged.

Reading this chapter gave me an idea for how one of my crossovers is going to play out. Thanks!

And yes, flamers are annoying. The first review for my first story was a flame (A. K. A. Death threat.) and for no reason. Don't like the plot of my story? DON'T READ IT.

Sorry for ranting. Anyway, just wanted to say thanks.

Hello! I would just like to say that I prefer this Fanfiction University story more than the others. It's rather refreshing to see that the students aren't getting threathened every other minute or so. So, congratulations on writing a new and refreshing Fanfiction University Story!

Okay, I have a problem with this first chapter. I'd like to able to stick positives in here to lighten the blow, but the main thing I can see is a general good format, so to speak; it can be read clearly.

My major problem is: where's the shock and awe? She just got whisked to Avatar-land. As an Avatar fan, shouldn't she be excited? And as a human whisked to another dimension without warning, shouldn't she at least be a little frightened? Where's the shock and awe?

My very favorite part was when Mary-Sue came and wreaked havoc. And also the crossover session was very informative. But because I already have been exposed to writing lessons before, the idea alone was not enough to sustain my interest. You needed suspense, particularly from the start until "shipping day." The story was very interesting after "AWS."

You have to use parentheses or an em dash (some keyboards automatically convert - into one).

What about Tokka? It's more widespread than Sokka x Ty Lee. Whoa...now I sound like a rabid shipper myself. I promise I'm not! I'm devoted to canon!...*dragged away by Ida*

I'm officially a Loalaa fan! I think your profile- and this story, of course- are hilarious! The characters of Avatar are great, and I too hate when people warp them for their terribly-written stories.

Man, I thought I was the only one with a Halo/Avatar crossover idea(haven't written it, may not have enough time to). Although its completely different from your idea.

Haha this was really funny! And good too! Too bad it's complete though...

That school sounds like fun... well, until you get hit on the head by Sokka. Ouch.

I would probably fail miserably at Appa's class, and not very well at bending. (I don't pay to much attention to the type of weapons or Kung Fu their using. That's what the internet is for.) I might be decent at Grammar(I am an utter grammar freak. Spelling is my weak point, but that's what spell check is for.) and pairings and cliches. (Seeing as all the in-show pairings are my friends.)

My first fanatic was utterly filled with fail. It was a 'online chat-room' insanely random story about Harry Potter. Joy. I still have it though. Reminds me of what not to resort to.

It kinda seems like your character is "overpowered" in the sense that she wins everything. XD

wait... so whats a Mary Sue?