Holy shit this was good. I mean, I've never read Vurt so I had no idea about 60% of the stuff anyone said (though I could make guesses and connections out of context-maybe you could put in edits at the beginnings of chapters to explain the world a little more? Or not, because this is like almost a decade old) but I was hooked despite-Team 7's dynamic was at first amusing and then increasingly heartbreaking until all I wanted at the end was just for them to BE OKAY. Which they were, so yay. Thank God for small mercies.

wow. Because of this story I went and read Vurt. The original one, by Jeff Noon. This story now makes a lot more sense. I liked it. It was super characterized, how they felt, the situations you described, the effect of dream snake bite, their melting characters, it was great!
And Orochimaru as Game Cat... brilliant! And I can't believe it's more than 5 years since last review! I was also kinda expecting a sequel of sorts. In the end they just passed the first game, no?
All in all, great story!

I discovered this story back in 2006 I think, not on this site, and I remember it stopped on chapter 7. All this time until now I kept wondering whether you had written more of it, and if not, what you had planned to write. Having resigned myself that it was going to be one of the countless amazing fics that sadly are left unfinished, I came back to give a last try today.

I had no idea I could find it here in

Today, in 2010 (FOUR YEARS LATER), I managed to read the ending. XD

And I have no words to express how ecstatic I am feeling right now. Thank you so much for this incredbible story. The characterization of the 3 was exellent, the way they felt confused when they started merging with their gaming counterparts, afraid they would loose their real selves was described succesfully. I love their relationship, I love how awkward were Sasuke and Sakura with each other due to their position of having a common boyfriend.

I haven't read the book so I still have questions, but I'll do that too. Again THANK YOU so much. This remains one of my favorite stories EVER, and I hope one day you can be inspired to write a sequel too.

Wow, amazing in a way I can hardly express!
It's not over, is it? O.o? No?
It has detail, and information, and unique style, and engaging scenes, and...AWESOME!
It's one of the best things I've read! Some things are confusing, because I haven't (I want to) read the vurt series... but I can mostly glean the information from your writing...
This is so...it's awesome. And I want to see what happens, and... it's just really cool...
More, please?
Whenever you have time?
Got vurt?
O.o That last one was weird, sorry.

awesome. i read vert not too long ago for a class i had and i really liked it. i never would have thought of combining it with naruto, but i think it worked rather well. i like the way this ended, with all three of them still together and strong and i really really like that you gave us a glimpse at there more intimate moments instead of just alluding to it; it made there relationship seem deeper. The ending leaves a great opportunity for a sequel;)

Amazing! I was on the edge of my seat for the entire story O

I'm planning on buying Vurt and Pollen as soon as I can, the universe you've portrayed is crazily intriguing.

Great work, I don't usually go for threesome relationships or yaoi in the Naruto fandom but you have shown that it can be done, tastefully while keeping the characters as themselves.

The ending felt very abrupt, was that intentional? S I'm still a bit sketchy on a few things, but I'm going to think over some stuff and probably re-read the story tomorrow.

I loved Team 7's reaction to Itachi in the appartment and when they pull out after they finish Part One, completely realistic given the circumstances.

It was such an awesome experience to read.

Thank you for sharing this )

KDx

Hi

I realliy love this story and this universe that it's set in..It's really cool and exicting!

I loved your story. The characters are very clear and interesting and the way explanations come slowly, in vague bits and pieces that always fit together is great. I couldn't stop reading!

Very interesting, I'm gonna have to track down this book now.

A really interesting series, especially with the dynamics of their relationships. And the merging of reality and illusion...

I rather liked it. Though, is this really how it ends? D:

I keep expecting more, a what happens next, but I suppose this incomplete ending leaves us wondering...

Still...T_T

i wanna read vurt now...

i'm a bit confused.

is it the first book in a trilogy? you mentioned something about pollen before so i'm just confused...

erm really interesting. i like your style, a lot. loved the ripple effect, love this because its got sasunarusaku together... so that's good.

very interesting.

sad that it's so underappreciated.

sad that you haven't updated in over a year.

OH i just read the beginning notes of chap 18.

so it's a series? is vurt the first book then?

Pretty awesome and as far as I know also very Original.. I Like. :)

What exactly is this world? does it have like monsters and shit in it or what?

Wow... this sort of leaves you hanging, but it's absolutely fabulous in any case! There are hardly any stories anywhere that portray a good, romantic relationship involving the whole of Team 7, I'm glad I found this one. I'm definitely going to see if I can find Vurt somewhere to read, it sounds like the kind of thing that I would absolutely love! Thanks for posting this, it was a great read

this is one of the best story's i've found here i aplaud you the way you ended it was apropratebut i never would have guessed im not much of a yaoi fan but you make it seem so natural that i guess i kind of aprove of it now even if i dont agree with the pairing to each her/his own im a lowly sasukesakura fan and this is my first review so be kind if u ever stip by