WOW this story was amazing!? Literally one of the best I have read it almost seemed like it was in a published book. I'm gonna miss this and wish I found it all those years ago, but great job.

So so far I love the story, but I jsut wanted to say, the "names" in the shows were nicknames, not their actual names

I don't get a bittersweet feeling that often when I finish a story, but when I do, I know the story was fantastic. I loved the romance between Mario and Wendy though, throughout the story, I thought Wendy was developing a prickish vocabulary, but I attribute that to her being a koopaling. I've constantly said I wished she had hair in the games, but throughout this story whenever you wrote about her hair, I kept imagining her in her usual baldness. I guess I've grown used to her baldness. Beautiful story all around!

Most of the main characters are so well-spoken that it kind of took me aback, particularly with Wendy and Lemmy, who had an awfully brainy vocabulary which I felt was out-of-character. You'd think if they had so much book-smarts that they would have defeated Mario with a super-smart evil plan a long time ago lol. The dialogue is engaging, though. Thank you for making a love story between my two favorite Mario characters. I really appreciate it!

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Amazing , just, wow I mean seriously wow it's an amazing story,i am At a loss for words

Wow...just wow. Amazing story man, I may never look at Wendy and especially peach the same way again (her going after Larry like that gave me the chills) The marriage thing was a little bit much but thats okay, I predict that maybe you'd write some x-rated bits to fill in for the special edition. One thing though, Lemmy's nickname is actually hip and Iggy is hop. Nonetheless this story gets 4 and a half out of 5 stars. Keep up the good work.

This was a awesome story I just loved it! It was sad that the kids are not really Marios by dna , but still a great story. Awesome work. :)

Awesome! It was so funny and hot great job.

Great chapter. :)

Ow my gosh that was super great chapter. Yes Wendy and Mario are geting hitched I am so happy. Awesome job. :)

That chapter was so awesome! It was funny, sad, and had action. To bad about Wendys mom and Peachs parnets. That was so cool when Wendy shot a fireball at Bowser. Great job. :)

This chapter was so hot and very funny. The part when "Luigi's face lit up. "You're gonna help us make pizza? Oh, there is a God who rules over the other dimensions!" that was so funny I laughted my head off. Awesome work. :)

Man this chapter was so awesome! Peach kick Larrys butt and Wendy is becoming more independent. Great job. :)

This was a cute and funny chapter great job. :)

This was a awesome chapter! It was so funny and so dang cute Great job. :)