Please contenue, this story let me learn who Shannon was.

I like the way this story is going I really want to see where it goes. Please contuine writing there is not a lot of brandon/shannon stuff out their!

When I started reading this story, I didn’t even know what Home Movies was. So this time around, I’ll be able to provide you with actual reviews that make sense. Whoopee.

The first thing to note here is that Home Movies is dialogue-driven, and you have preserved this. Of course, you’re very good at dialogue-driven stuff. I noticed that some of your Gorillaz fics are like this too, very funny, somehow transcending the fact that it’s actually written word and not something auditory.

“Paula shoved a spoonful of baby food into Josie’s mouth, but it all came out and dribbled down her chin.”

haha this is funny.

This chapter was better!

The part with Coach M. was hilarious

It could have certianly lasted a few more chapters. I have thought about placing a few of my ideas for a few home movies episodes to paper and throwing them up on this site. We need more H/M writers to join US!

Peace Out!

Man Mr. L is a tough one.

So far so good

Hm, well in the first chapter you referred to him as Brandon but in the second you cleared that up. The dialogue does remind me a LOT of Home Movies although sometimes I have to scroll down the page in order to find out who's talking to whom. So maybe creatively mention who is speaking first... just my suggestion. The story is funny and about what I expected to hear from a Home Movies episode, so good job there. Keep it up.

~laughs~ The conversation between Coach Mcguirk(sp?) and Brendon was hilarious. You had them in perfect character. _ Looking foward for the next update.

~Mina~

I'm a huge fan of Home Movies (I'm almost finished writing a fanfic for it right now), and I think you've captured the characters perfectly. The dialogue is very close to the dialogue in the show, and the plot is moving along well.

Can't wait to see what more you come up with (hopefully more McGuirk)!

Lol.

This is so weird. And creepy. In the first chapter, things were strangly adult. Now they're a lot more childish. And to be honest, it's freaky XD

But it's good all the same. The humour is good. I liked the Coach...perhaps because I never was really good at physical things.

I suppose I could do a better job of reviewing if I actually watched the show it's based on, lol. But this'll have to do for now.

Keep up the good (and somewhat disturbing) work, and never drop that pen.

I like it. The title's clever, the idea's clever, and the dialogue matches the show perfectly. One thing to point out is that his name is Brendon, not Brandon, but still a good job. If you wrote more, I would read.

~Mina~

Ah, yes.

I must say, my dear lady, I can hear your voice in this XD . But it is short.

But it is funny.

I feel bad for the poor Brandon child.

Kep working on it!