That's really lovely and cuttingly to the point. I especially liked the image of the maker's hands caked in white dust, of the image of the maker at all, really. It's a wonderful perspective.

This was very interesting, even if it was short. Glad my friend told me to check it out (which is the only way I read fics anymore). So good job I liked and it's very plasuable if you ask me.

Short yet effective, great snapshot

really cool

Amazingly well done. This is very original and real. Good job!

Whoa. Short but still kinda creepy. I'm sure if it's really horror, though...