| Reviews for Too Late |
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   Whumplove chapter 9 . 5/10/2017 Love love love this story! Definitely a better ending to the episode! You had the characters down perfectlygreat job! |
| danceofshadows chapter 9 . 1/3/2014 Loved it! |
| Aaron Tveit's Broadway chapter 9 . 11/27/2011 Awww, normality is overrated! Anyway, nice story :-) I should have been sleeping like an hour ago, but I had to finish this... School tomorrow will deal with the consequences - it was worth it! :-) |
| Kris chapter 9 . 6/4/2008 I liked it. I especially liked the ending...I thought it was funny :-) |
| jasminesmommy chapter 1 . 9/9/2007 ok im borrowing this story to say that you picked 2 great episodes to add drama too but i think you need to do another for common ground :) |
| Reyson chapter 9 . 9/11/2006 I loved your take on this AU ending for the Long Goodbye. It was one of my fav episodes. :). It certainly made the story so much more interesting. For someone who doesn't speak english as a first language you write very well indeed! :) The action and pace was well set that left the reader wanting to know what happens next and sitting at the edge of their seat. I really enjoyed this. Excellent work and well done. |
| TheNaggingCube chapter 9 . 3/22/2006 OVerall I enjoyed it. Great premise. |
| Heart-Of-Memories chapter 9 . 3/21/2006 Whoo Nellie! Poor Shep, always in trouble. Overall i give this story a 10/10. Keep up the good work Sheppy. |
| Cybrogue chapter 9 . 3/21/2006 that was a great story! i loved it. lots of whumping..very good! |
| chokolaj chapter 9 . 3/20/2006 Can't tell you how much I appreciated having a fic of such whumpage. This was a wonderful release for the craziness of my final semester of college. Thank you immensly for that. Can't wait to see what else you've got up your sleeve, er, think of some writing analogy cause I'm too tired! :) |
| Karolina chapter 9 . 3/20/2006 Great story! USAGE NOTE from about "ALRIGHT": Despite the appearance of the form alright in works of such well-known writers as Langston Hughes and James Joyce, the single word spelling HAS NEVER BEEN ACCEPTED AS STANDARD. This is peculiar, since similar fusions such as already and altogether have never raised any objections. The difference may lie in the fact that already and altogether became single words back in the Middle Ages, whereas alright has only been around for a little more than a century and was called out by language critics as a misspelling. Consequently, one who uses alright, especially in formal writing, runs the risk that readers may view it as an error or as the willful breaking of convention. So, the correct words would be "all right" rather than "alright". |
| nebbyJen chapter 1 . 3/20/2006 More? Man, was that wickedly wonderful or what? Hope you feel inspired again soon. |
| Deb chapter 9 . 3/19/2006 I really enjoyed that. Thanks :-) |
| Delka chapter 9 . 3/18/2006 Overall, very enjoyable! Thanks alot! |
| Starzangel chapter 9 . 3/18/2006 A lovely end to a lovely fic filled with lots of lovely whumping! ;) Poor Teyla...I'm glad John managed to cheer her up in the end. One of my fave bits of this story was in chapter 7 when John struggled to stay awake to reassure her. “Wow, you can be scary!” - lol! liked that bit. And it's nice that Elizabeth gets to be a bit of a rebel! lol! You've got another story planned! Yay! I'll hopefully be reading more from you soon then - I look forward to it! :) Happy writing, ~ Epona ~ |
