Great way to end the story, with the Freeman's taking a walk to Jack memorial. Poor Piotr, I think after the mansions experience with Emma and Vinces child, no one is eager to go through birth anytime soon. Saw your end note, still here; just been extremely busy these past few weeks.

After that experience, Im sure none of the women of the Institute are eager to give birth anytime soon. Great chapter.

~Vicious

Hey man i love your work, The first thing to really catch me was hellfire and brimstone and i have been tryin to read your other stuff, btw could u tell me what the first fic in your AGU series is plz.

still here loving the writing god luck in the army keep your head down

Great ending man, and congrats on the army. And yeah you do deserve a break.

Still an ardent reader! Although I know I didn't review the last ... time just got away from me the last week or so ... :)But I'm catching up. And I thought the last two chapters were very well done.

And the end was just perfect.

If you need a break take it, otherwise you'll just end up frustrated ... and since you are going to go into basic training you'll probably be to tired from crawling through the mood all day to do anything besides sleeping. :) But if that get's to be too much here is a mantra for you: 'Girls love a guy in uniform'.

It's completely true. ;) LOL.

Anyway GREAT story! See you around...

a beautiful ending, absolutely beautiful. Good luck with the army and don't get killed. It'll be rough not reading new chapters, but you got PLENTY of finished works to keep even me occupied (trust me, that's saying something). Overall, this story was very nice. The interplay between Emma and Vince was great.

A most fitting end to a touching fic my friend. "Hellfire and Brimstone" has been a historic achievement for the both of us and you carried on the legacy with great valor. The scenes with Emma and Vince going through the process of being parents was done very well. I can definitely see her working hard to get her sexy figure back. And as strange as it seems, I can also see her cooing with baby talk. It's odd for the White Queen, no doubt, but you've written it in a very believeable way. Also, loved the bit with Kitty! lol Bet Piotr's going to be hearing more about that for some time to come. As for the scene at the grave, it was very heartfelt and emotional. It's a sweet way to honor the man who made their family possible and made the ultimate sacrifice. It's a perfect end to a wonderful tale an I applaud you for your work my friend. "Hellfire and Brimstone" will surely remain one of our proudest acheivements for a long time to come and I am honored to have been a part of it. Great work dude. You rock and you'll blow them away in the army! Stay cool like you always do my friend. Slickboy out.

great chapter i liked the ending of the story when they all visted jacks grave. its a pitty that you'll be leaving to join the army but will have time off that is a good thing but hate to so one of the best writers on fanfiction net go. can't wait to see what you write up in the future keep it up.

I like it. YOu are master with words and feelings. I sulat you my friend. YOu defentail have the flame talent for this!

Vince and Emma better get used to this. I don't think those two are going to get a sense of peace and quiet for a long time to come.

Yep. Things are starting to return to some semblance of normalcy.

LOL on Kitty's comment and timing.

Fitting that they "talked" to Jack, as it was.

A very touching end, and I can see the potential for a whole lot of "adventures in babysitting", if you catch my meaning. Something for you to consider.

Very sweet ending, G-Man. This is truly one of you best peices, and I'm sure Slicky would agree.

I'm still here, but likr you, it may take a while before I can review again. My family is moving, so I have to help them before I move to my college dorm, so life is gonna be hell for a while.

Until next time, my friend.

Silverdash

I think you have closed very well the story. Some times felt extremely cute -like the moment where Vincent fed the baby-, and it was very nice seeing Vincent and Emma's life after the delivery and the reactions of the remainder X-Men to the baby.

And it was specially touching when the family went to visit Jack's grave. And finally Vincent pondering he finally felt at peace.

I'm sorry hearing you'll be taking a hyatus, but I agree you have certainly deserved it. I hope you iron whatever trouble the army is giving you out, and being reading other of your stories soon.

Take care. :)

If I didn't know otherwise, I'd think Emma has scared the remainder girls of having children for their entires lives.

This chapter has been really beautiful and touching. Very tender, and besides it had many humorous moments (like Jean and Betsy being reluctant to check in Emma). It is really a good way to finish the series. I can only look forward to the last cahpter you'll be writing.

Go, pal. You rock.

okay, the idea of Emma possibly developing funding for men to carry the children is scary. Though it did happen in one world of Sliders. Man I miss that show. And I love Jean and Betsy talking to each other over checking things out telepathically. It would be a scary thought.