Hate it. Too Mary Sue ish and Itachi, and Kisame are completely OOC. Go and read the manga or watch the anime again and the next time you write about those two, get it right.

I say you need to make more

great continue soon please

Just read this again for the second time, and I still love it every bit as much as I did when I first found it. Wish you would write something new!

Too Hot,so sad for a promise is a opinion,Yer gr8 at fight scenes and she is definitely a bomb-ass fighter,hence U should have a little more fight scenes.((well since the last time U wrote on this was in 2008,I guess this review/suggestion/request wouldn't matter!))

Poor Itachi,sometimes he could be so I love the way how he's ending all of his thoughts w/the "what did I say Now!" This stories going gr8,with characters progressing nice ty

Awesome!

Nice

I love it! This was Gr8!

Itachi X OC. Itachi meets a beautiful, mysterious, and very dangerous young woman that seems to know many interesting techniques beyond those of a ninja. She brings dangers that Itachi let alone any ninja could never imagine.

A few things, wow Itachi and Kisame are COMPLETELY OUT OF CHARACTER! Itachi would never say "you fucking bitch." have you ever read the manga, seen the anime? He is a quiet, respectful guy, he uses the honorary san and kun for enemies! How in the hell is he suddenly speaking like Hidan?

Second, this is completely a mary sue, why must you make someone completely perfect? the beauty in an OC is they're flaws, not how awesome they are, i personally want to vomit when i read a story with a mary sue, make HER INTERESTING!

I dont like how you wrote in they're thoughts in a big clump of randomness, yes, you need to describe things, and it is clever to use Itachi and/or kisame's thoughts to do it, but dont just shit it out like that, mix it up a little!

Itachi became an anbu captain at age 13, i think he would have a different, more intelligent approach at things.

But then again, i guess the good smut you have in there wouldn't work out if the characters werent out of character...all im saying is that your story makes no sense, but it has a certain charm to it, so...kudos? i think?

this is a good story

really great story! got me hooked from beginning to the end, which happens to be nonexistant as yet. D: must be patient and wait for more. be watching out for it! :D

The charcter seems more like a mary sue. She dodges/blocke every attack andwhen she does get attack it isn't effective. Plus this chapter is pretty long. on a scale 1 to 10. (10 being the best story ever) This gets a 7

No offense, but this is the typical badly written Mary sue fic. I suppose you already get enough good reviews, but I honestly can't see why. The block paragraphs don't make it any better. Well... I guess it would be appealing to others, but after seeing so many of these it just gets old.