This probably isn't going to be continued but this is a great story!

Umm... I thought Pride was the Fuehrer's 'son'? King Bradley was Wrath... At least I think...

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Continue plz! This is great!

You don't seem to realise that the Henge takes the same amount of Chakra as the Bunshin, so how does Canon Naruto perform the Henge? Simple, he doesn't, Naruto has NEVER performed the Henge. The Henge is an illusionary technique, ILLUSIONARY! Naruto actually physically transforms when performing his "Henge", if he doesn't then how do you explain the shuriken trick he and Sasuke did in wave? It would be more accurate to call his "Henge", Kage Henge, or in English 'Shadow Transformation', because theoretically when performed it would use the same chakra as the Kage Bunshin.

Zabuza is an A rank missing nin.

C'mon, mate, what's taking you so long? I'm eager to see what is going to happen in this story. So far, I see Naruto is Pride, Nina is Sloth and the fox, let me guess is it Envy? Also I want to see the hokage's reaction to the revelation that Naruto is now a homunculus and have him see the tattoo on his left eye...

this story has potential fanfiction does not have many fullmetal alchemist and naruto crossovers

Please update the story! I like the idea of naruto as a homunculus. Is he going to be like king bradley...wearing a eye patch if the tattoo on his eye appears? I hope so!

YOU BETTER CONTINUE OR ELSE M GONNA SLAP UR ASSSSSSSSSSSSS! THIS IS THE WORK OF ART!

Omg continue it pleaseeeee

Wow. Naruto as a homunculus. Didn't see that coming.
Why is the Kyubbi being so friendly? Isn't he supposed to be filled with hate?

Odd.
Take the good person test.

love the story so far

this is really awesome and interesting i cant wait to see what happens next please continue!