Reviews for Law and Order: HFIL Department |
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![]() ![]() Your the best fanfic writer IN THE WHOLE GOD DAMM WORLD! |
![]() ![]() ![]() They certainly do have medium awareness. Full of laughter as usual. *imagine Goku sweating bullets* |
![]() ![]() ![]() Is he testing them? Cold I mean. As for the "plot" you so creatively put up after the intro, going very well for an insane HIFL - hell. Each to their own characterization you gave them along with hilarious outtakes and reactions. 5 more chapters to go |
![]() ![]() ![]() I typed "biros" in Google search and found balled point pen then laughed. Oh, Cell. He's definitely my fave. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Must be impossible to find. (the book) Wow, Cell's attempting to not associate with them. I died laughing twice here. The first one was the yelling Cell and Frieza's comment on it. Then, the coffee Goku slyly asked. The rest was giggles. Been noticing that "Your Friendly Neighborhood Policeman" was similar to a certain superhero's slogan... |
![]() ![]() ![]() While totally funny, did the Kais created that Police Station? Wasn't much of a success now was it? Wouldn't it be better somewhere else? Funny how the ogres aren't taking Hell seriously. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Annnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnd, this is where Goku comes in. Good luck, Goku. I think you may get along fine wiht them. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I cracked at Cell's question. That was too funny. Though, I'm not entirely pleased with the idea of Cooler being written off as an idiot. A blatant, absent-minded idiot... good start. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lmfao, this is hilarious! Omg you dumbed down cooler, brilliant! Onward to the next chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The only bad thing about your story, all in all, is that it ended. XD Altogether it gave me a great laugh, and I can't say many stories do that for me. I'm glad I found this and decided to take a look at it. :) Bravo! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I don't want this to end, but I must read on. :O |
![]() ![]() ![]() Throughout reading this, I seriously can't decide who's more amusing and my favorite: Freiza or Cell, lol. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this chapter; way interesting, and I have a feeling it's going to get even better. :) I was pleased to see Pikkon making an appearance, too. I swear it's never a dull moment in this fic. _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Way amusing chapter - this story keeps getting more interesting, I can't stop reading it. :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() [Spoilers] I admit I was surprised about the appearance of Thomas the Tank Engine, lol - especially as Goku recognized him. XDD Way funny, as usual. Can't wait to see what happens next. |