Just found this story on the boards and may I say it is truly awesome! Finished 14 chapters in one sitting.. Can't wait to read the rest. Totally hooked!

wow, what a rollercoaster ride of emotions. I really enjoyed this story. It was really well thought through and completely unexpected. So many different aspects to the story. Great job :)

I've just read this story again, and I still love it :) I really love the Wheeler you created.

This story sucks me in every time I look at it. I've got my fingers crossed that you'll come back and write something else for this fandom one day :)

I spent all day reading this :) I'm half-way through my first Captain Planet fic and mine skips ahead five years - it's awesome reading something a little similar :)

I loved it - great job.

What an excellent story! And, if you ever finished the extended version of Chapter 21, I would love to read it!

I'm Hoggish Greedly. And I approve of this fanfic.

Epic.

Engrossing all the way to the very end. You did an excellent job with this story. A lot of thought and dedication was put behind it. I truly don't have any criticisms.

I hope you update your "After the Fall" story soon. The first chapter was quite nicely done. With your powerful writing style, I'm sure you will make that an excellent story too!

YOU ARE EXCELLENT.

RODNEY

YOU ARE DOING A FANTASTIC JOB WITH THIS STORY. YOU HAVE

EVERY RIGHT TO HAVE FUN WITH IT.

RODNEY

Finally remembered to get my behind over here and review this story! (Sigh, I am so lazy)

I have always been a big fan of this sort of storyline - where a character enters a world where they are either dead or never existed. This was no exception. I loved this story. The characterisation, the use of the eco-villains, the use of OCs. And you ended it the way a good A/U story should - with most of the A/U characters dying. (Maybe I'm sick, but that's the way I like it!)

One thing I found very interesting was your use of Rigger. Very clever. I've always wondered why he put up with Greedly's abuse. I would have quit a long time ago!

I am glad you wrote a relatively happy ending. The rest of the story was so sad (I was crying when Wheeler recounted Linka's death - devestating). You also wrote the kind of ending which is fine as is, but you could also write a sequel if you so choosed.

- Kate

This was a great story! I had a hard time stopping to go to bed because I wanted to keep reading to find out what happened next. You did a great job writing Wheeler and Linka. Watching her realize her feelings and still struggle with them despite knowing how he feels about her was classic Linka. It all came together perfectly in the end and a great twist. I was really preparing myself for a sad ending, but it couldn't have been any better! Nicely done.

Interesting story. Pretty well written and the plot was entertaining although the ending was a little lacking for me since it's not quite making sense to me, then again time travel and all that rarely does I suppose. Since the ending was so abrupt I was a little disappointed with that and the fact that CPs roll didn't seem relevant but over all the story was okay. Good job.

Sarah dearest, aren't you gonna write an epilogue? ;)

Well, a somewhat perfect end. Linka gets a second chance, the Planeteers have completed their mission at long last... and Wheeler actually got the girl at long last. Pretty good.

Amazing. Truly stunning in every detail, every aspect, every word. Well done, Sarah; I hope to read more fine work from you often. ;-)