Never finished this abortive drek, did you? Don't worry; I found a use for it; I'm going to print it out and employ it as toilet paper whenever I'm running low, and need something to wipe up after a particularly explosive bout of diarhea. Ta-Ta for now!

hope the next update would come soon.
thank you for this. great story and original twists.

man great story but you made tonks wimpy in many scenes and very straight forward in other
it was like she was bipolar

Damn. I wish you continued this.

I wish this story was still being updated

It's a shame this is abandoned it's really good and well thought out.

The fuck is all this?!
I came here for a dark(ish), non naïve Harry story but here you are feeding us with the same sappy crap almost every other author does.
He hasn't even met Tonks for two minutes and he's crying because she's in pain.
And this engineered relationship with Cho Chang just annoys me, wasn't she the one who betrayed the DA? Or are you going to make an OC just for that purpose?

Stories like these sicken me, not only are you disregarding human reactions and behavior but you seem to be off the opinion that by translating to us Harry's thoughts of:
'Not being Naïve'
and (my favorite) 'I don't love her, I just hold deep affection for her, now let me shag her and hope I get struck by cupid’
somehow we'll sympathize with the character and ignore the obviously fake reactions.
Now I'm aware this is your story and you can do what you like, but by Jove man, try to be a little rational.

Sincerely,
A concerned reader.

Woah that was intense I dint see it coming at all. Update soon please

What the fuckk!? Nooo. ! Tonks! Is she just obliviating some secret things so she doesn't betray Harry or is she obliviating Harry from her memory?!

Fuck Yeah! GO TONKS!

This is a really good story. I wish you had finished it instead of leaving it open.

Gringotts got what it deserved for all the shit it pulled on Harry.

Another point in favour of Harry being good boyfriend material is his sartorial sense.

People who add milk or cream to their tea make me cringe. There is ice tea, bubble/milk tea, and then there is tea that you drink straight up. The slight/medium bitterness is part of the package.

Goddamn, I didn't even consider that Harry and Nym were fucking behind Cho's back. Open and timely communication is key to making a relationship work, so Harry should have told Cho immediately after he took Nym the first time. However, the scheme Nym cooked up is stupidly convoluted just to ensure their successful threesome.

The story just got to the good part when you decided to abandon it. I at least want to see Harry 2.0 unmasking himself to the world and leave Dumblefuck speechless and sputtering!

Good riddance. Bane had always been an annoying prick, so Harry and Nym did everyone a favour by killing him and his merry band of psychotic, bloodthirsty savages.

What scheme regarding Harry's ability to love both of Nym and Cho did the former cook up that would require her to memory wipe herself?

Potter doesn't fuck around Mr. Chang. It's disgusting enough that dowry is still a thing in Magical Britain, so Harry had better twist him arm as much as possible to minimise the negotiated dowry. I would kill the elder Chang on principle for willing to whore out his daughter to Malfoy Jr. to buy protection from Riddle's wrath. That he would flip sides so quickly when there is prospect of more gold from Harry is even more sickening.

An extremely well-written and erotic sex scene between Nym and Harry. Nym will definitely be happy that Harry was the one to take her virginity and they were able to give each other so much pleasure. And because I'm going to stick with Dorea Black being Harry's paternal grandmother, it's even hotter that they are second cousins once removed.

Better watch out Dumblefuck, Harry is about to slip free from your control forever, and hopefully he will gut you like a fish for your machinations and massive ego that has left Riddle alive.

For Ch. 04:

When Bella makes a move on Harry, I want to see him fuck some sense into her.

For Ch. 05:

I love HP fanfics where the Gringotts goblins are openly hostile against magicals. It's wonderful to see Harry killing Griphook for his treachery and putting the greedy goblins in their place. I want Harry to withdraw all of his money from Gringotts and transferring a portion of his wealth to the Swiss banking system and/or its magical equivalent. Slashing the goblins' profits would tickle me greatly.

I love sexually forward women and can't wait to see Nym seducing Harry.