On the whole I liked it, though I have to echo what some other reviewers have pointed out about Anakin getting off scot free after his atrocities. He definitely should face some consequences for his actions as Vader. At least the ending is open-ended enough that maybe he will face some consequences.

Good story.

Good story with a very great ending. ;) Thx for writing this!

Loved this! Thanks for sharing!

Change your mind, you will!

Oh, hahahaha, "I'm your father." Priceless. xD I love how you do their banter and your phraseology, this is quite fun. xD

Oooh, now this I can't *wait* to see. "Your overconfidence is your weakness."

'Somehow, the words just seemed to fit.'

I wonder why?

Great job in writing up this story and, honestly, I found it quite funny that Anakin was stuck with Yoda and Obi-Wan on Dagobah. All in all, i'd like to compliment your characterisation and awesome writing style. The only bad thing about this was that it was short! D: (actually, disregard that, i'm just sad about it ending) *tear* ."

Keep it up! :D

-Sked-San-san

I like the changes you made. Anakin's such a straight-forward kind of guy, you really captured that well.

you did a terrible job ending it

That's cute, than Ani prefers sloppy swamps to sand (but then he did swin in a sewer during the Clone Wars, right?). It was also very clever of him to show up as Darth Vader by those troopers to rescue Obi! Very brilliant! Its also nice that Yoda is willing to give him the benefit of the doubt instead of just locking him up right away.

Happy endings are always better.

GREAT story!

That was a great ending to this chapter! That was very sweet, too, Ani holding his son. And its so like the Jedi to be too impatient to wait for the elevator. Reminds me of Obi hanging onto that flying droid thingy in Ep II, getting a "free" ride without using an airspeeder. And then Obi wonders where Ani gets all those bad, rash habits of jumping out of speeders! LOL.

I'm sure it was very hard for Ani to kill Palpy, as they had been friends all those years. I'm glad that he saved Obi though and that the two appear to be friends again, joking and stuff. :)

I'm glad that Anakin and Obi-Wan became friends again in this chapter, even if Ani still doesn't totally trust him yet. Truthfully, I hardly ever watch Espisode I because that whole fight on Mustafar is just so depressing. I'm glad you fixed it in this story!

Wow! Probably one of the best star wars fanfics I've read so far!