Great story. I’m glad I found your page. Any hope you are still writing somewhere?

Excellent story, well done!

Excellent story. Thanks for sharing.

Really great story. Thanks for writing this

I liked the admirals are misguided, not stupid.

And Bridger replying that he hasn't any of his e-mails in the past six months. (Sorry, my finger slipped and posted this mid-sentence.)

Krieg may be an amoral officer, he may be an immoral officer, but despite his good heart, he is not a moral officer. He is, however, the boat's Morale Officer. I especially liked the bit with Westphalen asking if they shouldn't ask Lawrence Wolenczak about this and Bridger re

The end? What happened to the virus? Were they hiding anything? Was the UEO being pushy? Did Lucas' father ever get caught for sending his son all his work and then hanging out at the bar?

This is a great story, well planned out, believable and good characterisations.

I especially enjoyed seeing portrayed a competent but not superhuman Lucas, who grudgingly gets down to all the work he has to do, and when he is finally found out, doesn't break down and cry and angst around, but actually blows up and voices his opinion. :) Thank you for writing this!

I enjoyed reading this story, I had a hard time leaving it for normal things that had to be done. You captured the characters very well in the written words. I felt the ending was a bit lacking, like there should have been more to it...but at least you finished it. Very nicely done...thank you for sharing!

I really enjoyed reading this! Wonderful writing. Poor Lucas' He really was getting run ragged!

Great story and great writing!

I liked this story! Thank you for writing it) I'll have to go to sleep now, it's waay to late!

AHH! More..more.. please hurry up! )

Loved this!