Reviews for Misfourunes Within the Royal Family |
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Aly Uzumaki chapter 2 . 2/11/2008 LOL UPDATE PLZ LOL |
Anorexia chapter 2 . 7/30/2006 Lol I can't wait for the second chapter! |
sai chapter 2 . 7/29/2006 there are people who shouldn't write fics, and your one of them |
Ryoki Zaikairna chapter 2 . 7/24/2006 HEY! Loved ch. 2~! Cant wait for more! E-Mail me This is Ann Havent talked to you in FOREVER! If you dont remember me I will be sad... |
flame gazer chapter 2 . 7/18/2006 lol! that was great! i just love a domineering legolas -sighs- ~tiff |
Anorexia chapter 1 . 3/6/2006 Lol. I'm so glad you finally posted your LOTR story! I loved it, like all the others! hope to have an update soon! |
shadowbunnies20 chapter 1 . 3/6/2006 lol, poor legolas! great story! :) uh, when thranduil is explaining to lunier he says that legolas is his foster mother instead of foster father. just thought you might like to know that. |
Dar-Angel-Red-Rose chapter 1 . 3/5/2006 “Look I am the one who you met on the road. I am your foster grandfather now and my son, Legolas is your foster mother. He said with authority. That is right from the story Just one question MOther? ROFL! its ok I get it I know how it is supposed to be. funny though Keep going! |
Dar-Angel-Red-Rose chapter 1 . 3/5/2006 “Look I am the one who you met on the road. I am your foster grandfather now and my son, Legolas is your foster mother. He said with authority. That is right from the story Just one question MOther? ROFL! its ok I get it I know how it is supposed to be. funny though Keep going! |
Stephy chapter 1 . 3/4/2006 It's very good, I'm loving it! Please update soon. |
werecanigeteyeslikethose chapter 1 . 3/4/2006 i think this child needs a mother or a really giood smack in hir rear. Legolas better find a wife soon or he might go crazy |
Sivaroobini Lupin-Black chapter 1 . 3/4/2006 I have a few suggestions - check your spelling and your grammar. And we could do with a bit more explanation on Sarmuan's... family. Plus the part when Thranduil met Lunier could use more description, feeling and explanation. And you should pay attention to the way they speak. Keep them from slipping into slang, or even speaking the way we do. Remember, this is Middle-Earth, it's a medieval place, they speak in an old-fashioned way. Other than this, good start! I'll try to keep reviewing, if you keep updating fast, that is! |
con chapter 1 . 3/4/2006 er legola foster mother? is that a mistake or is that true? |
flame gazer chapter 1 . 3/3/2006 me likes! me likes! ~tiff |