Reviews for Training Exercise |
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Tip chapter 1 . 10/5/2017 Good read! |
bee.zippy chapter 1 . 6/24/2017 LOL. Good stuff! |
a-d Pilot chapter 1 . 12/14/2016 I approve. I very heartily approve! And it seems so plausible! 'Ish. Plausible'ish. I don't know about letting the kids have control of fake ships, but yeah, everything else looks likely. I'm a bad guy? I don't want to be a bad guy! I'm defecting! Hey we don't want to be the bad guys either! Then defect! I'm going to! And then I'll be with the good guys! Us too! Us too! And that my friends is what we call democracy in action. Or in other words, run like hell. Nicely plotted. We knew something was going to happen from the stories summary, and then Jimmy doesn't just have things go his way. He improvises as new things turn up! Way to earn your happy ending! |
Arthorius chapter 1 . 7/10/2016 What jimmy should have done was take over both the federation and empire and became the emperor of The United Imperial Star Federation of Empire Planets... :) UISFEP |
tenchifew chapter 1 . 3/29/2016 Hilarious! Thank you for writing. |
Guest chapter 1 . 5/19/2015 Cute. |
MyValentine chapter 1 . 12/14/2014 Bwahahahahahaha! |
Alpecca Ankaa Black chapter 1 . 8/20/2013 I LOVE THIS! This story is epically awesome! |
Nina chapter 1 . 6/29/2013 Pfffffffffffffffffffffffft |
Snakequeen-in-Norway chapter 1 . 1/8/2012 Hehe. That was a bit confusing, with all the people I didn't know running around, but it was fun. -SQ |
MarauderGirl KS chapter 1 . 10/22/2011 pretty good! xD |
w- easy enough chapter 1 . 7/12/2011 *giggles* this is cute, great and funny! XD |
Azamiko chapter 1 . 6/21/2011 Cool. |
musicnutt chapter 1 . 6/18/2010 "I was going to storm off, but there's no where to storm off to." XD Loved this fic. |
SneverusSnapers chapter 1 . 8/14/2009 Very good story but i got a lttle confused between some of the charachters. Well done though! :p |