I knew the character of Alex for only a few chapters but boy are my eyes leaking. Deans reaction is what gets me. Lovely story with a great intensity

Great story. It had spot-on character voices for both Sam and Dean (and Alex was a pretty cool character too), there was suspense, protective Dean and protective Sam, and I have to admit I really enjoyed all the Dean whump... (Horrible, I know.)

I love finding well-written gen fanfics, so I'm very glad I found this one. Thank you!

I don't tend to leave reviews but I had to do it for this one. I know it's old and I don't know if the writer still comes online, I just really had to say my part on this.

First of all, I need to compliment you on the horror factor. This is the first horror fanfic that I read that has been so well written I've been able to perfectly picture it and get SCARED. The whole slaughter house idea is just so creepy it managed to freak me out. The Demon was one of my favorite parts in all this, it made perfect sense for it to be there and everytime it was mentioned I'd feel cold everywhere.

Secondly, the characters. You portrayed the brothers PERFECTLY, no mistake. They way they acted together and when they were appart was just perfect. Also Alex, what a great character. He really did remind me of Sam and I was really sad when he perished. Lyle and Keith were great too, though I hated them from beggening to end, haha.

Lastly... nothing else. This is just so good, I might read it again. BRAVO!

I'm not fan of horror(torture-gore type) stories but I really liked yours. It was so sad what happened to Alex, I think he was more like Dean than Sam. Great fic!

Nooo Alex! O.O I'm shocked... and stressed...

This was fantastic. The characterizations were spot on. The story line had a few surprises that I didn't even see coming and it was so suspenseful, I kept reading when I knew I should have been doing homework. :-3 With the detail put in, you could definitely identify with and understand the characters. It was a little Dean-centric, but I loved it! Great story!

Wow, this was awesome! Your descriptions are very jarring and you're really good at eliciting the right emotions- not to mention keeping everyone completely in character. Love it!

oh my god this is beautiful. Perfect characterization, and amazing description. It is such a beautiful story. This story actually made me cry a little. I hope you write more for Supernatural. The fandom needs more of your genius.

There are some things that MUST be done and one of them is saying kudos to your AMAZING story. This was a brilliant chapter, one of my favorites yet. Makes sense from top to bottom and you made Dean and Sam's character exactly how they shd be portrayed and for that, you have my respect. You deserve a review for each and every chapter from each and every reader, which I will when I find the time.

Once again - IT WAS AWESOME! )

aw such a sad but sweet ending! great story! x

really liked this chapter! like how you got Dean's personality down. so horrible they killed Alex! he was really cool! :)

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That was one of the best written stories/fanfics I have ever read. The emotion and descriptions just dragged me in. Everything was so real and you really held true to both the boy's characters. Everything was flawless.

Aw... How bittersweet. Just beautiful. A very sad, sweet ending to a horrific tale.

I officially love your stuff!

Aw GOD! You're breaking my heart, here!

Are you shittin' me? Alex? Man - I hope there's some way for the kid to come out of this alive!

GOD this story is suspenseful!