Hi, ive just finished monster but didnt know how to leave a reveiw so ill leave one here, i hope you dont mind. It was one of the best stories i have ever read, beautifully written, deeply disturbing and will stay with me for a long time. It takes a great writer to build a character out of pure hate and evil yet still make the reader fall for him. Am i wrong that i wanted goku to go with vegeta. Amazing story i cant wait to read this one, if its even half as good it will be awesome xlxl

Honestly, I think when I read your stories, I have to be prepared to be sad. I loved this though.

I absolutely loved this story I could not stop reading this I was so addicted to it I loved the way you describe everything and the plot was just so unique, I don't think I will love any story as much as I loved this one. It made me understand everything, it made me understand just how screwed p the world can really be and how little things can drastically change everything. I adore this story and it will forever remain a favorite of mine, I think it will always be my favorite it was so well written and I just can not believe how amazing a writer you are.

I'll be honest here, I never liked your stories but I LMFAO at your authors notes full of inmature rants. Heck, I even left a couple of flames just to amuse myself when I was bored. I assume you've grown up since then, but I'm still curious, did you suffer from a psychological disorder? or was that really you?.

Interesting

I'm actually not enjoying this... Well not yet. It's a bit on the dark side... Oddly enough I can't stop reading it and I'm determined to see it it gets better...

"Chapter continued..."

Now, talk about evil xD

Very interesting. A true exploration.

OMG! You can't stop there! Please continue!

second time reading this. i really wish you'd add more, but i guess this is where it has to end. i love this story no less for the twistedness and heartbreak. its possible the greatest contradiction im likely to come across in the fan fiction realm. i cant help but wonder where you get your inspiration. you describe the meaning of life and human nature so carelessly, like you knew it all already. you speak of insanity and depression as if you've been there, done that. Like you were inside the heads and lives of asylum patients, taking notes. How do you do that? How do you write so effortlessly? I could learn a thing or two from this, but im not sure i want to... either way, congratulations, you got me to stay up all night reading again.

I just re-read this chapter for like the fifth time; i think its my favorite. this story still hits me full in the face and leaves me both wanting to run away screaming, and wanting to keep reading til my eyes fall out. truly amazing, awe-inspiring, incredible writing, i hope you know that.
Shinsun

Dear god. Please have an ending for this story. Anything. Even a brief synopsis.

Did Vegeta actually love Goku at all? It seems like he just manipulated him to his will, but he... he couldnt be that cruel, i mean COME ON.

THAT CANT BE IT! it cant end like THAT! youve already broken my heart, what more do you want?

Oh my god... this story kept me awake, reading the whole night... and it's morning now... quite a roller coaster ride of emotions as I read it. Half of me agrees with kakarot's insight of life and another half doesn't... talk about grey line. Amazing story! I'm confused though... is chapter 21 the last chapter? or is there more? There hasn't been any update for ... 4 years? Hope there's more though.

I read read this straight through and it has to be the best Dragon Ball Z fanfictions out there. I'm am hurriedly awaiting it's completion.

This brought me to tears from sadness, from fear, and my goodness, your writing is so morbidly beautiful in this. The imagery you create is stunning, and I feel myself incredibly sad after reading it, but it's just so good... I can't stop myself. I find myself more open to these sort of stories now because you made it beautiful. You've created an incredible painting of gore and overflowing emotion. Usually I'm not one for depressing things but DAMN! You do it so well. I hope you update soon... Because you're story has tattooed my brain with fascinating images and strange attractions as well as twisted love.