I liked this fic. Simple but packs a strong punch and does a good job describing Misa’s character.

shit

I don't ship the two, but L would appreciate any sweet

Beautiful and sweet and so to the point. I love it!

your portrayal of Misa is so perfect, and that last bit was wonderful!

FINALLY! A fic that doesn't criticize Misa! I do not know why so many people hate her, but I can't bring myself to do the same. She does have those moments of maturity, and she put her life at risk in order to catch the third Kira by confronting him alone in order to trick him. And on multiple occasions, she made it clear that she would die for Light, even going as far to ask L (stay away from my man everyone) to kill her in order to keep her from breaking and saying anything that would get Light convicted. Also, as you mentioned before, she gave up half of her lifespan for Light even though she had already given it up once before in order to get the Shinigami eyes, so she could find out L's real name since he was a danger to Light, leaving her with 1/4 of her original lifespan. Like love how you described Misa's past, and how you made her seem like so much more than what most people see: instead of an immature airhead, you showed us a brave and heroic girl. Keep writing!
Codename: SailorVictoryX

o wow. That was absolutley terrific!

This is absolutely amazing. I cannot believe how just a few words can touch me so much - You have so much talent; use it well.
- Missy

This is great. There's so much emotion and meaning even though it's not very long. You have talent. :)

Magnificent, honest, and wonderful.
All in just a few paragraphs. :)

Very simple metaphor and a very nice look into Misa's psychology. I like how it was so happy in the beginning but darker at the end even if it was said in a innocent way.

amzing.

Beautiful, very IC.

A good portrayal of Misa.

That would explain L saying that he could fall for Misa... XD