Reviews for Portrait of a Demon
Hohoe chapter 11 . 1/26/2019
I hate you. I love you. I hate you.
nemvsis chapter 11 . 12/6/2018
not sure how i feel about this honestly - at first i couldn't believe that inuyasha felt love as opposed to some serious emotional manipulation, but then i had to consider that since it's from his point of view..why wouldn't he think that he was in love when really it was more likely feelings born from something like stockholme syndrome? i was also really sceptical of sesh translating his hate into physical desire, but when you look at it as a form of dominance, it makes sense. this was clever and fucked up and definitely not how i would characterise either of the brothers, but it made me uncomfortable in a way that caused me to analyse everything a little bit deeper. glad i took a chance on this and kept reading despite my initial reluctance
Alyah727 chapter 11 . 1/28/2017
This was a sad, beautiful, heart wrenching story.. I don't know if I love or hate it... It toyed with my heart till the end and I jus wanna say you invoked emotions within me I honestly thought wouldn't have escaped me while I read this.. I didn't see it ending like this and man the surprise
Vestal46 chapter 11 . 12/26/2016
I reading everythin the chapters of your history
Me is sad and dont no stop of cry
You are bad pooor inuyasha :(
Sage2427 chapter 11 . 8/11/2016
This was seriously bullshit. Fuck Sesshoumaru poor Inuyasha he deserved so much more! Wonderful writing btw. The descriptions you use flows very nicely.
Gnoemi chapter 12 . 4/18/2016
You just gave a literal meaning to dying from sex.
Kunjo the valkyrie chapter 12 . 12/29/2015
this fic was wonderful every moment of it was just so deep and the end the final chapter was just amazing never seen anything like it before
elphie chapter 11 . 4/10/2015
That was so sad
melanie chapter 9 . 4/10/2015
That's so hot
Syn'phasia chapter 11 . 4/7/2015
...Not enough to make me cry, but enough to make me irritated for a while. Really good story. But WHAT THE HELL? Whyyy, why does Inuyasha have to die? I was so certain in chapter 10 that Inuyasha would survive. But, this is, after all, an AU, an extreme one at that. I mean, how else can you explain the lack of Kagome? You concentrated on Inuyasha and Sesshomaru, but you failed to mention Kagome, the woman who he (currently) has feelings for. But its ok. I suppose his death was used to show how, in this instance, Sesshomaru was "superior" to Inuyasha? But in the end, Sesshomaru was the one who was inferior, not because of his strength, but because of his callous heart. He was holding Inuyasha back from freedom, and he gained this freedom through the doors of Death.

What will happen after this? What of Miroku, and Sango, and Shippo, who all care for Inuyasha? Will they go after Sesshomaru for revenge? Hah...yeah, I'll definitely be irritated for a long while. See, this is why I hate reading tragedies. But your story was so good, the language so delicious...I couldn't resist. And noow I am mad. Whelp, let me start reading that other story of yours. The ride was fun!
Syn'phasia chapter 8 . 4/6/2015
...Wow. May I say that I love this story? I would kiss your hand should I ever meet you (lol, I doubt that XD) but its so amazing...this story, that is. The psychological distress, the lever that you used to explain Inuyasha's rationale to become a full demon...I love it all. If I should complain, I only complain because I feel that it is...I don't know how to describe it...but I can describe this. It is true that Inuyasha was looking to become a full demon. But what of Kikyou? I feel as though you mentioned it breiftly, but I think you should elaborate. Inuyasha was, at one point, looking to use the jewel to have a happy life with Kikyou. What changed it? Well, your fiction is over, but it was something that wondered in my mind. Like, at one point, Inuyasha was with Kikyou, and she proposed that the two live together as humans. Inuyasha liked that idea...but something changed. This could be the answer to that gap..? I don't know. It's not my story.

Inuyasha is OOC, but not in the way I was expecting...again...damn it. It's like this: he is OOC but not at the same time. He's...off, but not painfully so. It's so weird, damn it. Though Sesshomaru seems to cover well for that...love this story, and hope to meet you on the other end.
Syn'phasia chapter 1 . 4/6/2015
I LOOOOVE IT! I love this fanfiction so much that I want to cry. (I am too lazy to sign in, but when I do...!)

I have been searching for a fanfiction similar to yours, where Inuyasha and Sesshomaru are approximately IC, where they don't get together on the first chapter, where there is...LE GASP...HISTORY! I love everything, from the flashbacks to the events...to even the beautiful language that you have displayed thus far. I love it all...do you know how happy I am right now?

The only thing that brings me down from my (orgasmic, lol) high is the simple fact that its a TRAGEDY! Will Sesshomaru and Inuyasha not get together? Honestly, I would prefer it, but it would be soo in character if they didn't...

Oh, and I have a small suggestion for you. (Well, its a bit late; you finished this series and you haven't updated since 2012...) I think, whenever you do a flashback, you should italicize it instead of saying "sixty years ago...present time..." you know? But its only a suggestion. Hup! Whelp, I am fully ready to stick this out with you and all...time for the tears of my life! Thanks for writing an awesome story such as this one!
kokonimo chapter 8 . 3/25/2015
I know this is a new review on an older story, but I just had to express...

YOU BROUGHT THAT ISH FULL CIRCLE, STANDING OVAY, OKAY! *hand clap*

Brilliant, brilliant! As I was reading this, the scene where Inuyasha is running crazily through the village with the shikon no tama, going on how he'd finally become a full demon came right to mind. Lovely tie in, I saw what you did there.

Okay, I'll continue on reading, haha. I'm loving this, though an abusive Sesshoumaru sucks. I can only hope for the best for those two. I hope Inuyasha will come to realize he deserves more /and/ he deserves better.
Guest chapter 12 . 9/21/2014
NOOOOooOOOO
Guest chapter 11 . 9/21/2014
omg, i cried! this CANNOT be the end! gawd, i never hated sesshy as much as i do now!

(not that i ever liked him-he was one of my least fav characters... Inuyasha is the one i like...)

HOW COULD YOU!?
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