I like it, but I think Lily and James Potter (Jily) I think it should come sooner. I’ve at the edge of my seat, wanting to know when they get together! It’s so interesting, all of it, but the Lily/James part isn’t coming fast enough for me. Other than that, it’s a great story. Yea, Lily and James!

That was so beautiful. I know that’s not really constructive, but I’m at a loss for words. It was just too good

He sounds like her worst nightmare come to life no
Wonder she cannot stop thinking about James at
Least he knows how to take a joke and laugh at
Himself plus most of the other houses already
Know that they're meant to be happily married
Though if al blabs it around hog warts she should
Just ask Remus to talk o her and I simply adore
Nicknames unless their cruel ones so she should
Hide her diary another great idea though I did think
Her best friend was Marlene McKinnon plus redheads
Can cope with being teased it's a hereditary trait were
Tough even though she's in denial it's adorable as when
She falls it's going to be quite volatile emotionally
Draining yet a celebratory dance also Lily needs some
Honest reassurance from James soon no joking or
He will lose her while destroying her confidence .
This has turned into my favourite jilly romance trust
Me the others were utterly hopeless yet yours has
Everything magically powerful while writing it from
Lily's view for a change how sensationally well thought
Out as lily gets someone whom can make James
Jealous for once except I would've had Chris not so
Stand of fish but then they do say opposites attract
So I'll love reading such magnificent exciting tense
Clever turn of phrases with wicked entendres plus
Lots of laughter ahead for these star crossed lovers
Whom might need a shocking jolt to their system
Soon as bottling it up just means troubles brewing
But I'll leave everything up to your brilliant highly
Creative mischievous imagination just where you
Want to go as you've done quite masterfully so
Far but there could be a bit of action hopefully
Around the corner as they do need to be shaken
Up but it's spell blindingly mesmerising plus
Bewitching in its appeal so thank you so
Very much I'm enjoying this gorgeous story
Elizabeth skinner.

It's very understandable lily feeling confused by what's
Happening now she's a teenager although to be fair
To her James treated her like a joke and hurt her
Over and over yet know he regrets it plus her home
Life wasn't exactly warm and cosy either as no one
Really knows if her parents loved each other. Anyway
Christopher sounds like another pretty boy so far but
Could he defeat James potter no way at least he's
Honest in his own way but he should stop listening
To romantic advice from Sirius ha ha .she cannot
Control love that's why most people suffer mid life
Crisises yet it's truly the most magical beautiful
Perfect warmest feeling ever that everyone needs
You have written one of the zaniest delightfully funny
Extremely amusing quirkiest loving superlative
Decadent tragic yet enchanting love stories filled
With pizazz colourful ideas suspenseful dramatic
Moments full of twists and turns loving friends
Of Lily's yet but I'm absolutely thrilled that
James still has to work for Lily's love and not
Take her for granted nothing worth having comes
Easy though please no vile insults from James
To lily she's a fiery redhead and he will push
Her straight to Christopher's arms and lose
Her yet obviously your an expert who's creative
Genius knows where this exquisite tumultuous
Love story is going besides I'm hooked just by
This intriguing tender realistic powerful first
Chapter it's wonderful yet full of doubts which
Is brilliant as they're teenagers so thank you
Very. Much for this challenging delightful
Enduring captivatingly strong love story
Your totally awesome Elizabeth
Skinner.

Absolutely fantastic...

Hey there - though you *probably* don't wait for the reviews as eagerly as you did - what? 11 years ago? I didn't even know about Harry Potter at that time - I just wanted to say that I really enjoyed this story I found while searching for something to satisfy my sudden Jily hunger (you know, the death anniversary and all). Well, I loved your Lily. She's just like I am or, at most times probably, wish to be as a person. Really, sometimes I felt as if I was reading my own diary. It certainly made me see some things about myself more clearly and we all know how fine it is to read something relatable from time to time, just to remind us that we're not alone. James was just a bit childish from time to time, but of course I had to love him anyway. So - thanks for that, and know that your persuasive requests for reviews still work!

Eeeeeeeeeeek! AMAZINGLY WELL-WRITTEN, I LOVED IT!

HAHAHAHAHA! LOVED THE ENDING!

HE SURE WOULD 'CAUSE HE'S IN LOVE WITH HER!

LOVED IT! SO ADORABLE! You write them well!

Awwwwwwww! I'M IN LOVE WITH THIS STORY AND SHE'S IN LOVE WITH JAMES! SO CUTE!

I love this story, you are one of the funniest authors on here! Do keep writing for the sake of humanity!

I loved that...

great, well done!

Love. It.

Bacon.

My favourite breakfast food!