I don’t even know if you’ll see this since this fanfic was finished awhile ago, but I just wanted you to know that I enjoyed reading every bit of this story. I loved it from start to finish, even though some parts were pretty sad and angsty.

This fanfic is okay, and I like the writing style, but sometimes it gets too sappy, and I feel like the fact that they are all eleven year olds is being forgotten. Also, I really don't believe in love-at-first-sight, so I do find it slightly odd that Sirius and Remus have some weird connection automatically, so there's that. Don't mind me, this is just some constructive criticism that I'm hoping will be useful in the future.

You know..your every chapter is giving me goosebumps!
They are so exciting...I just love them!Keep it up!

seriously one of the best fanfictions i’ve ever read. i’ve been reading since it as 11 and i’m 15 now. read everything fr, harry potter to the outsiders to stranger things, and this is definitely one of the most well written and amazing ones ever. amazing work!

As much as I hate what Remus had to go through I love the angle that you have taken on him, I've never read any fanfic remotly like this and I love it, great job!

Masterpiece

i’m sorry but baby harry is most definitely the sweetest most adorable thing i’ve ever fucking seen and i’m living for it.

okayyyy i’m starting to think that maybe... they shouldn’t be together. not after that “he’s a werewolf” comment

literally reading this second half of the chapter brings me either second hand embarrassment or just pure anger and i can’t decide which one lol

oop. i spoke too soon lmao. not even ten lines down he becomes a total ass again. i take it all back lol

I love how you portray Peter beforehand. I think that with us not knowing much about the Marauders before PoA, it was easy for us to hate him. But when you write him like this, it makes me question: what went wrong? was it lack of friendship or attention or credit? to be honest i feel a bit bad for him

Please, I know you wrote this fanfic a long time ago, but I really loved it and I discovered it recently, and I love this pair there is no possibility of retaking it after 11 years and continue with the story, I hope you read it and have not changed the account, please it would be very cool since there are few stories of remus and sirius

They just get together and the others don't find it strange that they are gay?

god no more reading elphie :(

idk y u want rl/sb again. sb always just hurts and hurts rl. sb fucking kicked him to the curb, dumped him, abandoned him, and wouldve let remus die had it not been for my elfie. just bc sb is sad and suicidal doesnt warrant forgiveness for that. rl is VERY justified