| Reviews for In the Midst of the Battle |
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   0anhonestpuck0 chapter 2 . 8/14/2016 I truly loved this. :) |
| 17Penny-Lane chapter 2 . 11/11/2008 *stands still*wow... I'm just.. I'm wordless, that was awesome |
| Sousukes-Girl chapter 2 . 9/27/2007 beautiful. |
| vhsgooey chapter 2 . 2/24/2007 i love it! i read this chapter twice! GOOD PAIRING, GOOD STORY, GOOD AUTHOR! *sigh* i'm a hopeless romantic i know... |
| vhsgooey chapter 1 . 2/24/2007 it was good hime, again idk why but i love the kissing scenes, maybe it's from lack of experiance i have with it, idk, i'm sure you'd say something like it's me expressing my own deep dark wishes for that to happen to me or something but it's good i like this pairing and you wrote them well |
| Alasse Fefalas chapter 2 . 10/1/2006 wow! the setting was nice and the descriptions were magnificent! Good work on portraying them together in war! |
| Iwata-Hatori chapter 2 . 8/16/2006 Nice story, i like the way you wrote a quite desperate and fragile Roy, love and despair were quite well mixed up on your lines ;) |
| Lady of the Void chapter 2 . 5/13/2006 This one made me cry. Seriously. Movemment the second was incredible. I cannot express how perfect all the word choice was. This was truly beautiful. Thank you. |
| Paeonia chapter 2 . 4/25/2006 Love this fic! Sums them up very nicely. |
| momiji-k chapter 2 . 4/23/2006 That was beautiful. Very emotional and well planned. You did an excellent job. :) I know what you mean about the hits to review ratio. About 600 people will look at your fic (for example) but only about 10 will leave a review. :( It's really sad, why can't people take just 10 seconds to say "good job" or "needs work". Although I prefer a little more than that. So... Good job and I hope to see more from you soon! |
| Nilmiel chapter 2 . 4/20/2006 Nil: That was so beautiful.. i was looking through ROyais and i found yours, and o my gosh, ths was so beauiful I love that you didn't make it a straight out stupid lemon like a ton of othe rpeople do... you gave it so much purpose, it was oso nice to read, so beautiful o see them together! Oh, you have made my life. i love it, i love it. |
| cathaya chapter 2 . 4/18/2006 The description you used is incredibly detailed - my favourite part was the symphony Roy heard. I love the expression, the "louder, Louder, LOUDER" bit. But what I love about this fic most is its intensity. Yours is a beautiful interpretation of Roy and Riza's relationship on the battlefield. |
| Anabella chapter 2 . 4/12/2006 It is great, you are a great writer, so keep writing fanfictions. A salute from Argentina, Ana |
| Dark Gotham chapter 2 . 4/8/2006 Wow. Wonderful writing. You played that out beautifully. |
| crying.underwater chapter 2 . 4/2/2006 Great one-shot. Probably the one of the best riza and roy pairings out there. |
