| Reviews for The Five Mother Hens of Virgil Tracy |
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   Ironman234 chapter 19 . 6/26 huh? OH! ALAN AND TIN-TIN... TOGETHER? ALAN AND TIN-TIN SITTING IN A TREE. K.I.S.S.I.N.G FIRST COMES, ARGGHHHHH! OK I'LL STOP, DON'T HURT ME ALAN! |
| Ironman234 chapter 7 . 6/10 I FEEL SORRY FOR GORDON XHUGS THE BLONDE SECOND YOUNGEST CHILD WHO SITS NEXT TO HERX I MEAN, GEEZ! IF IT WAS REAL AND I HAD BEEN IN GORDON'S POSITION, I WOULD HAVE DEFINITELY FREAKED OUT! (TO GORDON) HOW DID YOU NOT FREAK OUT, BIG BROTHER? (GORDON SHRUGS) I KNEW IT WOULDN'T HELP HIM AT ALL, PROBABLY WOULD HAVE MADE HIM FEEL WORSE ABOUT IT! |
| VirgilTracyFan2 chapter 1 . 6/9 Erm, I have a mistake to point out! VIRGIL HAS BLACK HAIR, ALAN AND GORDON HAVE BLONDE HAIR! PLEASE CORRECT THIS! |
| Ironman234 chapter 33 . 5/16 PHEW! SO GLAD VIRGIL IS ALRIGHT! I WAS SCARED AS WELL. I MEAN, VIRGIL IS MY FAVOURITE AFTER ALL! ALSO, SCREW YOU FOR TORTURING THEM ALL! ESPECIALLYPOOR GORDON, IT MUST HAVE HARD HAVING TO SEE HIS BROTHER GETTING WORSE. XSIGHS SADLYX I KNOW HOW HARD IT IS TO FEEL YOU'RE GOING TO LOSE SOMEONE! I'VE LOST WAY TOO MANY, AND WITH MY GRANDMA IN A HOSPITAL BED AFTER A STROKE A FEW YEARS AGO, AND A 91-YEAR-OLD GRANNY,I'M PANICKING JUST LIKE GORDON WAS IN THIS STORY! |
| Ironman234 chapter 16 . 5/15 HAHA! THE WAY VIRGIL ASKED THE QUESTION, MAKES IT SEEM LIKE THEY REALLY DID CONSIDER GETTING RID OF THE SQUID. CAN'T STOP LAUGHING INSIDE, SMILING ON THE OUTSIDE, AND CLEARLY USING CAPS LOCK IN MY REVIEWS XD! GIVE THE FAMILY A HUG FROM ME AND UPDATE SOON PLEASE! ALSO, I FEEL SORRY FOR THE FAMILY, SURPRISINGLY, I FEEL THE MOST SYMPATHY TOWARDS JOHN AND GORDON, RATHER THAN VIRGIL! |
| Ironman234 chapter 4 . 5/15 haha! I'm picturing Virgil's face if he finds a mark on his 'Bird! I CAN'T STOP SMILING ON THE OUTSIDE AND LAUGHING ON THE INSIDE AT THE IMAGE! |
| Ironman234 chapter 3 . 5/14 Really? I always thought John would be great company, since his family rarely see him! Also, love the fact that the title actually explains what is happening in the chapter. Poor Virgil has had a "Roll lot of roll misadventure!" XD SORRY! UPDATES ARE NEEDED. IT'S THE SAME DATE AS THE MOST RECENT UPDATE, EXCEPT IT IS 11 YEARS AFTER THE UPDATE! |
| Ironman234 chapter 2 . 5/14 XSCOTTX I THINK YOU'VE GONE FROM HAVING 5 SONS, TOE HAVING 4 SONS AND A FISH. XJOHNX HAPPENED A LONG TIME AGO. XME RUNNING IN AND JUMPING INTO THE POOL WITH GORDONX HI GUYS! HOW ARE YOU? XBOYSX FINE! XSCOTT WHISPERINGX MAKE THAT 4 SONS, A FISH AND A DOLPHIN! XEVERYONE LAUGHS AS I THROW A SMALL FLOATATION DEVICE AT THE BIG BROTHERX SHUT UP SCOTTY! |
| Ironman234 chapter 1 . 5/14 Aw! Poor Virgil! ALSO, DAMN YOU FOR WANTING TO TORTURE HIM! XD JUST KIDDING |
| PurpleNightwing chapter 32 . 4/6/2017 Please update its 2017 |
| PurpleNightwing chapter 4 . 4/3/2017 Please update its 2017 |
| PurpleNightwing chapter 1 . 2/8/2017 Please update its 2017 |
| walmar chapter 33 . 1/2/2017 Never thought 33 chapters about a virus would keep me so interested, could not stop reading, thank you for a good story and letting Virgil to get better |
| The.Demon.Charley chapter 27 . 7/5/2016 you made me cry...and i not usually cry...that isn't a bad thing that you made me cry...its just...different...Thank you...i needed it |
| The.Demon.Charley chapter 7 . 7/5/2016 my poor baby...i hope you make him better soon... (btw i say my poor baby because im one fanfic im writing i am his gf :)) thank you for writing this! its amazing keep it going if you want! - LyricalLiv |
