I am so far loving this! I can’t stop laughing. This is incredible. I especially like that I haven’t found twenty typos. Normally I find like hundred and it pisses me off, but so far this is doing alright. I’ve found a few, but nobody is perfect and we all make mistakes.

I don’t know if you ever read these but I read this back when I was around 13 years old and I’ve read it about 4 times and it’s one of the best things I have ever read, I feel so many emotions reading this and you have such a fun way with words. Thank you thank you thank you

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...and they were roomates

ohmygod is shouldn't be a mess but i am. this was beautifully written! im about to start the sequel and im excited and scared so thanks!

...Is it bad that I feel sympathetic towards Itachi? I mean, I don't like how he's fucking with sasuke like this, but he's been mentally ill since he was like seven from what I'm getting here. I also like how you put emphasis on naruto and sasuke's parents being assholes/involved in dirty business. I get pissed at them sometimes because they were both one of the direct causes of their suffering in canon, but I'm only a lil' salty.

Itachi smokes? 0_0 Don't turn my baby into a thug! But seriously this is a very good plot twist. Omg poor keita hahaha.

It's really interesting that you wrote Itachi having turned spiteful after being so pressured by his parents. It's a little hard to imagine him also wanting to take it out on sasuke since he looked up to him so much, but madness is a slippery slope, so I could see him growing to want Sasuke to join in his misery as well. Really interesting story, keep up the good work! I mean, Naruto can't be dead, right?

Hahaha there is nothing weirder than listening to your little brother have sex, I'm sure. But wait, Itachi was ashamed? Is he homophobic?

naruto the next morning:hi
Me: zomg so cute you're forgiven I wuvs you so kawaii let my squish your cheeks little kyuubi I could never hate you squeeeeeeeeeeeeeee.
Yeah... I have issues.

Yeeeeee Zabuza! This chapter was so cute, I loved it. I love the way you wrote Tsunami too. She was so badass in the manga even though she never really did anything I feel like her bravery as a mother and daughter is something people really overlook.
Sakura: Owwww it hurts!
Tsunami, internally: shut up you little bitch you don't know what real pain is! Ever tried pushing a cantaloupe out of your vagina?! Huh?!

Hahaha Kiba has walked in on Naruto and Sasuke so many times he might as well have a three some with them. Hee. *pervy smile with nosebleed*

Oh my gooooooooooooosh. I can't believe Sasuke would actually think Naruto getting back in bed with him meant he was ready to be in a relationship with him. Gaaaah I hate emotional struggles and misunderstandings. Very good work on this chapter. I love how you wrote Kiba, but at the same time he's over here trying to kill Sasuke for every little thing and I'm like damn man you need to chill.

Hahaha omg I love Genma and Raidou so much, I'd love to have an enthusiastic group of supporters like Sasuke when it comes to my romantic life. Lol I'd love to hear the story of when Sasuke almost ripped off Genma's balls. This story is hilarious and I love the way you have written the characters. I really like how you put Sasuke in this precarious position of not wanting to scare Naruto but wanting to let him know how he feels. I haven't seen many fanfic where one or the other doesn't just eventually say "I'm gay" so this is really interesting.

man, i read this shit when i was like 12 (i know djsjdjd) reread it again when i was 15, and now i’m 18, debating to reread it. it holds a special place in my heart