After binge-reading your entire archive, I’ve read this, A Change of Plans, and Avid maybe ten different times each in the past two or three weeks, and I still find myself hurting for these two lovebirds when the conflict arises, and then swooning again and again when everything’s better, and when they’re back together. I really can’t tell you just how much I love your amazingly detailed and expertly written stories, and there’s something about them, even the oneshots, that keep them from getting old. I’ve been reading One Last Year as it updates now, and I can’t wait to see more work from you, CM!

Keep up the astounding work!
- V

love :)

Awwww! How cute! Like, totally amazing, and I wish I could write poetically like you... Dang. I just need some inspiration and a little coffee.

That's my new motto.

Totally awesome!

Aww! It's so sweet! Everything fits together perfectly!

I love stories like this - the ones that don't mention any names. ;D

Aw...

I'm so amazed. You made her sound like a real person...XD All those little quirks made me smile. It's true: you notice little things about people you truly care about...

The consistency with the "There was" was also impressive. You managed to begin each (and, well, almost every) sentence with the same words, and yet none were boring.

I salute you, madam! *does so*

Luved the ending!

I really like the personality you gave Zelda. \she really seemed like a real person.

aw cute

Aww, that's so sweet. I am so grinning like an idiot right now. Anyway, I loved the format of this; it was kinda poetic.

Very nice O

It seemed almost poetic how you used "There was" at the beggining of everything ;)

oh my god, i've just remembered you hate pink T_T my favourite colour but anyways great story once again, i love the way you wrote it al very original.

An eccentric Zelda. That's surprisingly...appealing.

Another fantastic story. You're just /too/ good at this.

Very nice. Only a few minor things I see wrong. I have never heard of stripped socks so I am assuming you meant striped, as in they have stripes on them. Also when you wrote "He really knew nothing to art" I believe you meant "He really knew nothing OF art." Another thing is eviler has one "l" not two. Oh and in my opinion dripping wetly is being repetitive, can one drip dryly? I would get rid of the word wetly. Lastly, and this is probably just me being nit-picky but I don't do my bed, I make my bed. Sorry for being such a Nazi about this stuff I really did like this story.

AW

cute and very well written, i like this style.

thanks for writing it!

Aww..this was cute!

Yuki V.