Reviews for Gobsmacked
thatsmeglen chapter 6 . 6/14
I’m glad u never took this story off this site... it was really great, a wonderful first time
Clinio chapter 5 . 6/10
The finals lines are wonderfull
Clinio chapter 6 . 11/20/2019
Btavo!
LilyJean630 chapter 6 . 5/31/2017
Great story! Very sweet and realistic of their first time!
jensenaili chapter 6 . 4/20/2016
Excellent portray of a first time. Much more realistic than some of the stories here. Very earthy and awkward and sweet. Nice to see someone treat Ron like a human rather than a twit.
holly1492 chapter 6 . 3/9/2015
Perfection!
InkWeaverabc chapter 2 . 7/18/2014
Poor Harry xD such brilliant dialogue this is. "well- shit, ron!" i love it! So accurate!
PF2724 chapter 1 . 3/30/2014
This is so exactly how their first time could have been it's unbelievable how accurate this could be. And as you can see by my word vomit that I'm absolutely gobsmacked by this brilliant story. Also the epilogue was great ! :D
EchoDeltaNine chapter 6 . 12/19/2011
Oh my God, you are an amazing writer. Hands down in my top 5 favorite authors on this site! I have loved everything I have read so far and I just thought that you should know that you are amazing!
forgetmenotjimmy chapter 6 . 11/8/2011
Great fic! Love how unsure Ron was about everything and it was so natural, nice one!

:D
N. E. Won chapter 6 . 5/3/2011
This story is weird, awkward and wonderful all at once.
mudpuddledemon chapter 3 . 4/5/2011
Stellar.
Shaina chapter 6 . 10/7/2010
My review is for the full fic. It was marvellous and I believe both Ron an Hermione are very in character. I loved the curious part of Hermione (it is so much her, and so much natural) and also the insecurities in Ron.

Also Harry was very well portrayed.
half-hearted heroine chapter 3 . 5/25/2010
Hahaha omg I love the section of Ron's thoughts that start with "I'm going to die, right now, and with a stupid goofy grin on my face." Awesome
loogs08 chapter 6 . 11/9/2009
Brilliant story! Everything seemed to be in character with Hermoine and Ron!...i bet this is how their first time would have actually played out! lol..
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