Reviews for Gobsmacked |
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thatsmeglen chapter 6 . 6/14 I’m glad u never took this story off this site... it was really great, a wonderful first time |
Clinio chapter 5 . 6/10 The finals lines are wonderfull |
Clinio chapter 6 . 11/20/2019 Btavo! |
LilyJean630 chapter 6 . 5/31/2017 Great story! Very sweet and realistic of their first time! |
jensenaili chapter 6 . 4/20/2016 Excellent portray of a first time. Much more realistic than some of the stories here. Very earthy and awkward and sweet. Nice to see someone treat Ron like a human rather than a twit. |
holly1492 chapter 6 . 3/9/2015 Perfection! |
InkWeaverabc chapter 2 . 7/18/2014 Poor Harry xD such brilliant dialogue this is. "well- shit, ron!" i love it! So accurate! |
PF2724 chapter 1 . 3/30/2014 This is so exactly how their first time could have been it's unbelievable how accurate this could be. And as you can see by my word vomit that I'm absolutely gobsmacked by this brilliant story. Also the epilogue was great ! :D |
EchoDeltaNine chapter 6 . 12/19/2011 Oh my God, you are an amazing writer. Hands down in my top 5 favorite authors on this site! I have loved everything I have read so far and I just thought that you should know that you are amazing! |
forgetmenotjimmy chapter 6 . 11/8/2011 Great fic! Love how unsure Ron was about everything and it was so natural, nice one! :D |
N. E. Won chapter 6 . 5/3/2011 This story is weird, awkward and wonderful all at once. |
mudpuddledemon chapter 3 . 4/5/2011 Stellar. |
Shaina chapter 6 . 10/7/2010 My review is for the full fic. It was marvellous and I believe both Ron an Hermione are very in character. I loved the curious part of Hermione (it is so much her, and so much natural) and also the insecurities in Ron. Also Harry was very well portrayed. |
half-hearted heroine chapter 3 . 5/25/2010 Hahaha omg I love the section of Ron's thoughts that start with "I'm going to die, right now, and with a stupid goofy grin on my face." Awesome |
loogs08 chapter 6 . 11/9/2009 Brilliant story! Everything seemed to be in character with Hermoine and Ron!...i bet this is how their first time would have actually played out! lol.. |