That was real great omg im already crying
But how did sirius come in he was disowned as well?

Good Story. It Says A Lot About Bigots That They Care More About Themselves And Their Own Happiness And Perceived Betrayals Over A Loved Ones Happiness. Can't Feel Too Sorry For Bella. She Chose Hatred Over Her Family Which Is A Lot Less Sympathetic Than Andromeda Or Any Blasted Off Blood Traitors Black On The Tree Choosing Love

Love this story. I'm obsessed with black family fics

THIS! I love this! I have always thought that Andromeda's marriage to Ted was seen as a great source of betrayal, more so than disappointment, to her sisters. I loved Bella throwing a tantrum, flinging the vases and anything else she could get her hands on against the walls, until finally she was out of things to throw but not out of steam. I liked your Rodolphus a lot, too, as he sort of lets his wife rage but when she seems about to do something crazy, he tries to be the voice of some reason.

That last memory/flashback was amazing. I even remember that art from AKO ;)

Gosh, I once your version of Bellatrix. This is perfect. It's utterly chilling when she says in a level voice that she's going to kill her. Perfect.

Sirius was always the cool and careless,fearless to even face her when her own husband could not

Oh dear. Because she loved him.
What a mess...

the way you wrote Bellatrix's feelings made me angry towards Andromeda you are an amazing writer keep it up

I never thought i'd say this but poor Bella

Bella is so emotional when you write her.

I love it.

I love how you took Bella to a whole new level, so to speak. This is one of my favourites! I do wish to know what the letter said though. This is my first reveiw so I am trying to make it the best!

Wow.

really good, all your one shots have really good endings, they give me chill bumps.

i love how this story contains the conversation bellatrix and andromeda had

in chapter eight of a keen observer. i think that was brilliant:] this is a great,

no absolutely SUPERB one shot:]