How many crossovers is there?

I loved this fic, and have started rereading it. While doing so, I noticed something - During the part where Mr. Diggers is revealing what G'Nolga was attempting, you had Ranma named Harry by mistake.

Other than that, I didn't see any issues. Again, an awesome fic.

Enjoying the story so far, even though I have no familiarity with Gold Digger. One point I had to mention: the arena should have water-filled moat (as in a defensive trench, often filled with water) not a water-filled mote (as in a speck of dust).

Anyway, I'm finding this story interesting. Nice version of Ranma here. I like the idea that Ranma can absorb information rapidly, so if he ever focused on anything the way he does the Art, he'd be ridiculous at that too. Love to see some of the stuff he's invented and how he uses it.

Also glad to see him finally reining in Nabiki. She's honestly about my least favorite character in the series.

Well, I look forward to seeing where this goes from here.

So I'm sure you are done with this Fic but I saw this and thought you would like to know if you ever wish to fix it...

"... DISQUALIFICATION!" Harry was impressed and appalled at the nerve of the short, formerly smirking woman."

Harry is not in this fic I'm pretty sure you meant Ranma.

Small thing I have to mention about tipping: It's not custom in Japan. Going so far as giving a tip even being considered an insult, depending on the situation. While that might be/is slowly subject to change, no delivery person like the one in chapter 37 would EVER demand a tip. Unless they wanted to get fired and some comments put on their file that would make it rather unlikely for them to ever get any decent job again from anyone researching their professional past. What that delivery man did was basically the Japanese equivalent to pissing on your customers shoes in full sight of everyone.

i have mentioned this once before in the section where theo is telling them all what gnolga is trying to pull to not have to face julia later you call ranma harry

Awesome fic! I love it. And THANK YOU for being one of the few writers who actually finish a story.

I would like to point out a small mistake that seemingly every fic writer makes though. In one chapter you mixed up the definition of the 2 words Wary and Weary. Not sure why everyone makes this same exact mistake but Wary means you are cautious about something, Weary means you are tired.

Still, GREAT story!

I have a theory why this story wound down like it did. You were so focused on Ranma persoanally you lost the world. Everything and everyone not personally involved with the events in Ranma's life are not doing anything off screen and its let the world apart from Ranma's personal life die. Its hard to write in a dead world.

My suggestion for any sequel or picking this back up with a continuation is get the source material together and read it taking notes on all the characters your crossover already brought into the world and let their personalities create complications and life again to give this an involved thriving world to continue it.

I'd really like to see more of what Ranma's Lifeforce powered inventions could do to advance the technologies of Jade.

Daniel Thomas Stack
AKA Spokavriel at yahoo.

Explaining ILS incase someone else hadn't yet. Instrument Landing System. It is a system that lets pilots have telemetry on the landing area even if they can't see anything through their windscreens. In Die Hard II an adjustment of the data was used to make an airplane plow strait into the ground thinking that the runway was 200 feet lower than it actually was. freak is just shortening on frequency.

If you ever worry about something being fictional, don't forget people can get to ShangriLa from many planes and times. It might only be fictional for Earth Realm but quite true and viewable by a seer on a parallel reality/plane. Books also arrive from the past and the future.

Gina caught up with Ranma in Japan. But then She-Go stole the safe deposit box. After that moment she doesn't appear again until they are getting ready to go to Jade. Shouldn't there at least be some thoughts about missed nookie possibilities? Something? Even why and when she went back to Penny and Ace? Is Cheetah nursing her Husband Stryyp back to health the reason she isn't here? Or did she land the Giant Tuna from the comics?

There are just some Gold Digger parts in the time before coming back to Jade that are left not just off screen but unnoted. Like the 2 Wererat prisoners. Did Anyone check up on them before this trip?

Daniel Thomas Stack
AKA Spokavriel at yahoo.

Engineers can be injured or die in the field. A damaged building or bridge could collapse and kill them.

LIFE IS A SEXUALLY TRANSMITTED DISEASE THAT IS ALWAYS FATAL.

Everybody dies.

Even God died, while he was Jesus.

Classes on American High Schools:

Math

Science

English Grammar

Literature, often combined with the grammer class

Physical Education, a sport or exercise

Health, a sit down class about things such as basic nutrition and sex ed, this is combined or alternated with Phys Ed

A language like French, Spanish, or Latin

History, of the local State, America in general, or the World

Geography, I had one year offered once

Practical Skills like Typing, Working on Cars, Computer Use, Woodworking, Home Economics

Sadly the ability to use a Library, Research, Solve Problems, Think for yourself are not even mentioned.

GOOGLE FOR THE WIN!

Where you have KARA above did you mean KARIA?

It is a tiny thing, but I think somewhere in the story you used Kara instead of Karia.

I will hunt down the chapter later.
Maybe if I use Google just right it will do the work for me.