Please update soon! I want to find out what happens next!

ok thanks for the info, didnt really need it, so when is the actual story going to start?

so far you seem to have spent 4 chapters explaining about pure bloods and such like.

all I have worked out that I would guess is important to the story is that harry was banished for some reason, ended up 15 years in his past and now has had confirmed that he is also a pure blood, and that he doesnt like dumbles much for various reasons.

hope to see the story actually start at some point.

It's pretty educational. I like something like this is quite different from the usual Harry being banished from the wizarding world for whatever stupid reason. Too bad there's not much of these stories out there. A pretty interesting perspective of writing it touched the subjects of varies area. I can tell the regardless of Harry in this story even though he now called Count Lucien de Bressolles. Where did you find the name for this story any ways and you must of did number of research to actually write something sound knowledgeable. Good Job.

I like your story. It is different than many out there, because it is written in a journal format. Please continue with this idea. I also like how he isn't completely stupid or ignorant like many many other stories including canon. Looking forward for the next chapter.

now this is not meant to sound offensive or anything... but with a starting like that i'm sure it will... where's the story? there's not a plot or anything! most of it's just information that takes you 3-4 parargraphs just to expliain something that you briefly mentioned - then once you've explained what it is - you dont say how it's relative to the story... sorry if that's harsh.

Interesting, but a clearly explained history would be even better...

Story is interesting, writing style is unique and entertaining, but it's kind of dragging. It's a little slow at least for me.

Wow! I really liked your story. Some of your ideas were really creative and so deatailed. Some of the information, such as the crests, sounded like it was well researched. I thought your writing style was great - It really reflects the period you're writing in. I only found one real mistake "A second generation mudblood is someone whose parents were both purebloods" But other than that nit was great! I think in the next few chapters if the plot really gets going it will be exciting!

Hello again. Another nice chapter even thought the explanations are getting a bit tedious for me. I'm still wondering where this is all going but I can't wait for the next chapter. See ya next time.

original plot keep going

Interesting, I don't know why people don't review to you. So far this seems like a really cool story.

i dont often review but ur story is somthing unlike any fic i've ever read so i just had to let you know. you are an awsome writer. looking foreward to your next chpt.

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