Aww !
T'was quite a ride !
Lots of action : not a dull moment... Great !
Thanks for sharing ! :-D

Great job, I have read a lot of SG1 FF on this site is this by far is one of the best general team fictions I have read...great plot, good pacing, great dialogue and you left enough "unsaid" to let the reader read between the lines...once again great job.

Ah...just spent the afternoon reading this entire story over at The Alpha Gate but didn't leave a review because I'm not a member there. So...I found the story here, and I'm leaving a review. :) Amazingly done. Had me gasping with surprise and wincing with dread. You have a great knack for dialog, and it really shows in this story!

intriguing! Really intriguing.

Btw...

Do you know that there is an own character filter for Jack's clone/Jon? (okay, it's new, I requested it) It's "Jonathan O."

Interesting, well done.

That was absolutely excellent. Had a ball reading it! Great!

I liked it,really.

till I read everything to the end, I didn't walk got my attention all over the story:)

interesting plot,i loved the has everyting in it:D

I am glad I've read it,cos usually I don't read stories more than 3 chapters long:D

thank you!:)

Wonderful adventure story. Enjoyed every chapter. Look forward to your next story.

I think this is the first time I've reviewed, even though I've been reading this story diligently since day one. Hopefully you'll forgive me!

Wonderful story. It's well thought-out, with layers of complexity and isn't cheesy. I think you have a great feel for the characters and the story.

YAY! Another update! Woohoo. :) I love this chapter- it's all clicking with Daniel, we have Gen Hammond back(or so we think) it's looking more and more like we're getting Janet back, and knowing your writing style, you'll likely write the end so that the Ori really *are* the good guys! LOL- seriously though, I love your writing, and I love this story. It comes across as well thought out and well planned out- a very good mix with your wonderful writing skills.

Wow- Daniel going nutso(sort of but not really) Janet coming to her senses(sort of), Hammond being the mole and being shot along with Barrett, Danny being the "prodigal" son... Okay, so I'm going to wager my guess that I've been formulating over the past several chapters. Daniel doesn't remember his time as an ascended being, but the Ori sure do. They want him to reascend so that they can control his powers. Just like how they suck the life out of their priors, they can probably do the same to fellow ascended beings, and Daniel is probably full of energy from his previous ascension. That's just my guess, and it's probably way off, but I figured that I'd share. :)

The prior doesn't seem surprised to see them- figures. I LOVE this story!

And, if I'm not mistaken... was that a little S/J ship thrown in? If so, I ADORE this story! D

Can't wait for the update!

Your story is wonderfully engaging! All these twists and turns and the added bonus that it's actually unpredictable! I love every bit of the story so far - very intricate plot and serious undertone, but you've managed to work in some subtle and not so subtle humor into the characters' actions/dialogues that had me laughing. And like it was said before, very true to character. I am especially surprised and pleased to see some returning characters from the SG universe. I can't wait for more!

I've never really been a fan of Cassie, but I enjoyed this chapter. Never liked mini-Jack before, but I don't mind him in this story either.

Fun scene between Jack and Ba'al...and another excellent twist at the end of the last chapter! Daniel's changes are very interesting...can't wait to see what's happening to him. Curious - do you post as you're writing, or do you complete a story then post bit by bit?

Another great couple of chapters! I'm so intrigued by this. Just when I think I have a clue where this is going, everything goes topsy-turvy. I generally know that I can trust Teal'c, but I shouldn't say that, because as soon as I do, you'll make him the bad guy! lol. Great writing, great story, and great updating. :D Thank you!