speechless

This is beautiful. I can't believe I didn't see the parallels before. Jiraiya as a Hatake actually makes sense, in a strange way, and not just because of the white hair. Your writing style is also beautiful, and this shall make its way into my favourites _
-Riya

Unlike Kakashi who remains rooted to the past with regrets and unfathomable guilt, Jiraiya runs away to distance himself from it.

OMG so touching love what you wrote keep writing!um... i have been reading some stories and they say jiraya is kakashis uncle... can someone tell me if it's true or not?

i suppose it is nice to think that those two actually do have someone there for each other.

I really like this idea. Great line of thinking.

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Omake:

"Kakashi, you're not to read your uncle's books until you've reached chuunin."

"Okay father. I'll be the youngest chuunin of my class."

"sigh..."

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hahahahahaha X'D

biggest fan EVER

liked the idea and the execution of this, really nice one shot

Yup, that sounds like Jiraiya.

Bastard.

Love, love, lvoe this.

I hope others give your Narutoficion pieces a try. This non-romantic fiction piece about Jiraya and Kakashi is shocking, yet very well laid out. The premise, that may seem farfetched at first, has enough fact in the tale to prove it's worth many times over. There are enough truths about the characters that follow the manga that a make such a possibility plausible.

Stringing along emotion is a talent you use with ease. It makes your work in many ways, subtlely distressful (if that makes any sense). I was very taken by this what if scenario. I wouldn't doubt Jiraya would leave a special message in this last Icha Icha book in code just for Kakashi to decipher after his death.

Interesting idea. Well written.

I love the idea of Jiraiya beig related to Kakashi. You did a fantastic job exploring their relationship.

very good!

Very interesting. I've never thought of it that way before. Jiraiya makes this much more entertaining since using him makes it more believable. Great fic!

"You see, Jiraiya hates the past, and Kakashi is the past. They're just too different to get along."

This line sums them up so, so perfectly. ANd I love how I would NEVER have thought of those two as related, but it makes sense, and it works.

Also, the two lines about the books and Jiraya's writing made me squee so hardcore - I love it when there's hints of more things going on in them than just smut.

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