I still would love a one shot of the Aftermath. Annie seeing the Bird, maybe investing in Mick's team.

Very well written.

This was amazing, I loved it so much!

D'awwww! It's so wonderful!

Thank you for writing!

Thank you, second time reading and enjoyed just as much

great story!

This was really good! At first I thought it was Vírgil, but then it clicked. I really, really enjoyed it!

how about when Alan gets home. the families reactions. maybe do another story to add onto this one about what the family were going through, go on to when Alan gets home. maybe have them help him deal with everything he is going through. sort out his memories.

I would love to be a fly on the wall when Annie sees TB1. great work

This is a great story! Really well writen, I liked the changes from Alan's first person point of view to the other family members' third person point of view.

Loved the first chapter, although I was convinced it was Scott rather than Alan!

I also loved how Alan was really worried that he was a car thief or some other kind of criminal! Aww, poor Al!

FAB story!

That was brilliant! Man, there had BETTER be a sequel! did I spell that right?

FAB

Fenix

I really liked the ending! I was a little surprised that his memories came back so suddenly, but the fight between them was great. Well, in a heart-breaking way. It was a perfect way to trigger his memories- great job!

But if you ever *do* feel like writing a sequel... that'd be cool :o)

Oh... what an evil cliffhanger. Loved the confrotation between Scott and Alan!

Poor Alan... *sniff* But you really got his character down perfectly - even though he's got no clue who he is. Quite an achievement!

Will you give him a chance to race? Come on, let good old James have the flu!

Oh yes, I love the Moonlight Sonata. Aber ich schätze ich kann wohl auch deutsch mit dir reden, wie? *g*

Ich hab sie jedenfalls angemacht während ich gelesen hab... sehr passend.