Reviews for Interlaced |
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Guest chapter 1 . 5h This... is brilliantly well written! |
rollercoastergeek3 chapter 1 . 11/2/2016 I love this so much! It is one of my favorite Literati stories ever! |
subchan chapter 1 . 11/10/2015 O.O I must have more! please don't end it here! |
mac-reye chapter 1 . 10/8/2014 Absolutely fantastic! |
Iscah McKrae chapter 1 . 4/13/2011 Curious...when Rory says, "I never knew my dad. Not really," why does Jess throw a twig? Wouldn't that indicate that he DID know his dad? Beautiful moment, but that aspect of it confused me. |
litme chapter 1 . 9/16/2009 Great job! |
Djux chapter 1 . 9/1/2009 Wow. No words, and yet so much to say! I absolutely loved this. Every part of it. Good I miss Lit ..and I miss well written, realistic lit fics ..and this is what I've been looking for. Thank you so much! And I read someone wrote something about Jess swearing, that you should have omitted it ..I mean BS ..have they met Jess? :) thanks again, for sorta making my day here! |
19merz86 chapter 1 . 6/18/2007 I love the holding hands part...so cute! |
Thank You Goodbye chapter 1 . 10/28/2006 I enjoyed your story. I guess I feel having them kiss here detracts from their real first kiss (which spawned a an intense summer of ‘shippery and a thousand fanfics), but I did feel that their game got interestingly intimate, right about the time they were bonding over absentee fathers. That was a moment I wanted to freeze-frame and explore more. There is a dark, quiet sweetness to these early lit fics, the innocent girl and the knowing boy. The tentative groping. Always nice to revisit. Thanks for writing it. |
maymayisarjlovr chapter 1 . 9/29/2006 wow. that there was...wow. really really good. so cute, i absoluely love! i mean it..super good. extrodinary. amazing. i love to pieces, defianetely going on my favorite's ! macy |
The Superior Critic chapter 1 . 7/30/2006 Brilliant! It's so expressive, complicated, detailed, and it all works. You write so well - not a spelling error to speak of, and everyone is in character. Great job. |
Alabelle chapter 1 . 7/14/2006 Very good! |
ashy chapter 1 . 7/6/2006 do you have a sequal to this story i would love to know what happen to the both of them |
Christine Writer chapter 1 . 6/24/2006 Good job; could have left out Jess swearing at the end. Overall, good oneshot. |
ggfan1979 chapter 1 . 6/7/2006 Wow! I just stumbled on this...so good! So well written, and so realistic. Great, believable dialogue. This is not your average fanfic. I really enjoyed reading this! |