Marvelous! Glad to know you're still kickin' and following your love of writing. As usual you're writing is leagues above that of most ff stories and I dare say your grammar has improved quite a bit. Keep going, I'm rootin' for ya!

I'm glad you're back, another fun chapter from an excellent author.

Hooray for an update. You’ve got a real talent for describing scenes. Can’t wait for the next chapter.

I enjoy this story, it's cute and has vaguely clever moments. Though, I feel like I've read a scene very similar to the one you wrote with Ron going to help Shego. That said, it may've been your story and its just been a long time since I'd read it causing deja vu.

Question, how was Shego able to go to the golf course without being discovered? Her green skin is a dead give away. At the very least the waiter say her, and if she could see others playing then they could likely see her also.

Lastly, I'd recommend getting Grammarly. It's a free program you can download online. It'll help you quite a bit I think as you have a tendency to use the wrong word at times and spell things incorrectly.

All in all, nice story and I'm excited for more.

I'm confused. If Kim doesn't know Ron escaped than why did she talk her mother to have him meet her for lunch?

Glad to have you back.

great chapter 17 and 18 shego smirking at her boyfriend ron i think we should invite kim

That was fun. I remember starting this story 10 years ago and remembered it being fun then. When one of your stories popped up recently in my inbox I read it and then wandered around to see if you'd updated anything else. I glad your back, if only for a little while.

Thanks for a great read.
Steve

...So this wonderful story had to go and bite the big one... such a shame, it was in its prime, only to be dismissed and forgotten about, like a piece of junk someone lost interest in...

...So this wonderful story had to go and bite the big one... such a shame, it was in its prime, only to be dismissed and forgotten about, like a piece of junk someone lost interest in...

you missed one of these - "
after: im sorry ron.
still great story.

actully feeling bad about bill who only did his job better then any other henchmen.

Man i really like the fact that i cannot really guess ahead of time in what way the story goes.
except when shego challanged ron and she said conditions it was clear what the outcome would be but even then you made ron a bit of a badass but not to much wich was unexpectet. good on you

ah man this is just awesome.
I love you man.
its even nice to read your notes.
you made my life just a little happier.
im so glad that you exist.

I enjoyed this chapter very much.
was also realisitic on a powerlevel with ron's kind of huge enough of expirience only thing hindering him usuly being his fear. and i personaly know that anger lets you forget your fears better then anything else. also your fight description was detailed enough to know what is going on while still not eeing TO detailed. you know let your own imagination fill in the gaps.