Omg, THIS IS SO FANTASTIC, YOUR WRITING IS BEAUTIFUL, THE WAY YOU PORTRAY MULTIPLE CHARACTERS AND HANDLE THE RELATIONSHIPS ARE AMAZING, THIS MADE MY DAY! I SINCERELY HOPE THERE CAN BE MORE OF THIS ONE DAY BECAUSE ITS TRULY FANTASTIC. ONE OF MY TOP 20 FANFICS FOR SUREEEEEE

This is really really great, it's too bad you stopped writing

Write more! Please!

Dear clio21000

Well I guess it has been a few years since you've written this story... or maybe written anything, I don't know. I remembered reading this a few years back and so I searched for it so I could reread it (on the Refuge actually)... and I have to say ... it is still as good as it was back then :).
It's a real shame that you never finished it! I would love to read about David and Jack and Mush and Blink and about all the others and of course the Strike...
Now I know it is not easy to get back into writing... I should know since I gave up on mine (but then again I was never as good as you)... maybe you can find your muse again and finish this story. I know there are still a few of us old school newsies fans out there!

wish you all the best and I hope to hear from you :)

Zoran

Please continue writing for this story you ened it at such a cliff hanger and it's killing me to not know what's going on

This is one of THE best stories i have read. Thanks for being an amazingly incredable way to spend my free time! What happens next though? keep on writing please! Do you think you will ever get something in there about Mush and Blink? Seems like it'll go somewhere eventually but im dying to know when eventually is! I love your story!

- Moi!

Oh. My. God. So amazing! Please please PLEASE continue this. It's incredibly well written, the plot is thoroughly engaging, and then you just had to go and drop a bomb of a cliffhanger like that. So I implore you, please update. I-I need to see what happens next.

I hope everything is all right with you and that life just got too busy for you to write for a while-But, if you EVER feel it in your heart to pick this up where you left off, I'm certain you would have us all peeing our pants with excitement. :)

P.S. I should also add, I JUST started an account (the sole reason being so I could leave obnoxious comments begging you to come back). :p

Aahh! Where have you gone? :P I hope you haven't abandoned this story. It's an epic, for sure. Please, please, please, come back! :)

Amazing story! I just hope that you'll finish it!

I know this probably won't help...

But if you ever decide to add onto this...

I really really hope you finish it.

I kinda adore it. Like a lot. :]

Alright, even though I know its been over two years since you last updated, I'm really hoping that you haven't abandoned this fic, and that you'll finish it or at least update soon. Wow, what a run-on but Newsies is somewhat infamous for authors who go away for a long time and update years later out of the blue so I'm holding onto hope. There's so much that is unresolved and I'd really like to see how it all pans out. Oh and that last chapter, with Jack and David? Loved it! I've been waiting this whole fic for that moment, please don't leave it there!

This chapter actually made me cry... Although that could be partially contributed to listening to Seasons Of Love and the Ill Cover You Reprise while all that was going on. Well great job!

WOW. im still kind of in shock of hoe good this story is.

it would be even better if you updated very, very soon :D

This is a pretty fantastic story- it's got its kinks, not gonna lie, but I am captured. Race and Spot are just spot-on (hehe) and I love all the dramarama considering their pasts and how they're lives are always the same course. And I admit, I sort of hate Del...sorry. She just doesn't have something I like about her for, but I applaud your characterization. IN OTHER NEWS, OHMYGOD, DAVID AND JACK. I have been waiting for this for so many chapters, and YES. PLEASE YES. Update soon, dearest, please do.