Beautiful

well, you have done a great job making this fanfic, its very lovely...KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!

that was good keep the chapters coming

that was good keep the chapters coming

that was good keep the chapters coming

that was good keep the chapters coming

Nice chapter, just one thing it's otousan, not otoosan.
In Japanese they extend the o sound with a 'u'.

It seems this story hasn't been updated in awhile and I was hoping it would. I just recently found it and just had to read it. Idk if it's too late or not to ask if another chapter is coming but I doubt it is. Im hoping though

Your awsome, sorry for not reviewing on any other chapter it is just that I wanted to get to the next chapter... And the neji and hinata thing I really don't care., you didn't put them together! And don't take any readers crap about ur stories their yours be umm creative

There are a lot of us that DO care about this story! It is great and you do such a wonderful depiction of Naruto and Hinata. I think that it would make a whole lot of your readers sooo happy if you would put up some more chapters even after all of this time. It does come to a conclusion of sorts, but leaves Naruto and Hinata in a dangerous situation. Thanks for writing!

Wow! Turtleduck59 this is a fantastic chapter went from being a super sad and despairing one to one with a wonderful feeling as Hinata breaks out and they get married. You have written a classic of the NaruHina or Naruto stories that I have ever read. I would never say anything negative about your efforts. Thanks soooo much. I see in the preview that you have more planned, great!

You really have knocked the ball out of the park with this story, it is a great one! The chapter was so well written as they arrive back but there is a major cloud over their joy as we now know that Hinata has been betrothed to someone else. I hope that it is not Neji. I am already starting to feel down because I can see that this story is not complete but I'm happy to have found the part that you have finished here:)

This was a powerful action chapter. Emotional and tragic also, a very exciting story. It was amazing the once Naruto and Hinata had defeated the bad guys then Hinata was hurt so bad trying to help Naruto come out of the fox's control. Pretty sad at the end.

This was a great romantic chapter. They finally know how the other feels. It was written up soooo well! Kind of some dark clouds over them with the bad guys ready to strike them the next day.

Naruto and Hinata are together for the next year? The jutsu sound even better as you have given out more info in the story. Very creative ideas in the way that they are being trained here...their relationship is ready to take off now:)