Aww, this was really deep. Very nice descriptions (haha, Goofy's big feet sticking out of the tent), great flow of dialogue, and the characters' interactions were very sweet.

Aww. Nice introspective piece. I love your imagery!

Nice story.

What a twist: Sora and Riku are out on an adventure, away from home. Again!

This was a very sweet fanfiction. I absolutely loved it! There should be more fanfics out there like this one! Great job!

I love the way you write.

This was wonderful! You know, I can honestly say that I have never before read a fanfiction where Kairi and Mickey interacted. And this was an absolute joy to read!

I'll be reading more of your work, yes indeed!

-The Brunette Bookworm

Aww, that was sweet! And a nice take on what happened right before Sora and Riku come back. This 'tis going on my favorites. :)

nice

This was awesome, you have Mickey to a T. And the character interaction was fabulous. *favorites*

Love King Mickey, watching him was one of my favorite childhood memories!

Nice Ending!

I really enjoyed this story! It's very sentimental, and is a good idea of what happened while Kairi, King Mickey, Goofy, and Donald were waiting for Sora and Riku.

I love King Mickey and Kairi- they're my favorite characters. Great job!

Touching, to say the least.

The fic put a smile on my face and made me think. )

Mickey is perfect, so is Kairi. X)

GAH. There are just not enough good fics about the Disney characters out there. This fic is fantastic - two characters whom we never really see interact, and you nailed both of them - Kairi is adorable and Mickey is spot-on with the KH characterization!

Also, wow, gotta tell you. On a side note? Mickey, Donald, Goofy, and Pluto all finding it funny when Goofy's feet stick out and burying Goofy in the sand and Donald being good at math? *squeals shamelessly* Wow. Straight out of the cartoons. *dies*