Reviews for In Your Eyes |
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![]() ![]() ![]() could be good, but then someone had to ruin it no? -_- waste of time |
![]() ![]() ![]() i really like it when the next one be out |
![]() ![]() First of all ive got to say; This is an amazing story. a good storyline that ceeps on goin. most fanfics are just a few pages so, i like the longer one's cuss here actually some things happen and not just yaoi and the confession. I like the twist at the end. The big question; who is Naruto's imposter? remainds me of blood prison. if i were you id leave orochimaru and itachi out of the picture. think weither youd wanna have it a prank (that goes to far) or a seareus threat towards naruto (or someone else?). it would also be interestin if the entire village turns against naruto, exept for sasuke. or that sasuke would have to determine who the real naruto is and who the fake facing two naruto's. but whit an imposter like that, i think puttin some humor in it will be good. all kind of pranks done by the fake naruto and the real one cleanin up the mess. XD i hope this was a little helpfull. ;) I enjoyd reading every page of this story till now and i know you wont dissapoint your fans. thnx for sharin it whit us! good luck! sasunaru forever! 3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Itachi also means Weasel! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Bhahahahah silly sasuke all girl like and fainting. Lol very muchly amusing and interesting things happin in this story, again very awesomly written and the characters well done. I think this was just pure excellents, and i so hope u have written other stories XD IMPRESSED keep up awesome skills! |
![]() ![]() ![]() hahahahah fox child likes this chapter alot, how embarressment for sasuke eek. But great writing style, very humerous, and characterous very awesomly correct. So far this story is the higlight to my week, I have found it that amusing and interesting. So i say AWESOME job and im leaving on that note coz i wanna read more heheheh x] |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow i kinda was hopping for a bonus chapter i wanna know who each one is more like and sasuke got the other twin right? |
![]() ![]() ![]() loved it |
![]() ![]() ![]() im counfused! (not hard for me) did the babies die? please tell me! other than my normal counfution;(sorry for spelling) that was outstanding story! i read on my dsi every night, i have been reading this for three nights(i take that back 4 days, cuz one night i was un able to get on the internet), 2 hours each. i found this when i looked up suiside, i was bored i havent read any good storys in FOREVER! i loved it all exepted the end, cuz i was counfused. |
![]() ![]() Whoops nevermind. You already corrected that, o3o; By the way, the reason I am not reviewing besides these two reviews is because I read this on my DS (R4 card. Lets me read text) |
![]() ![]() o.0 Itachi means Weasel. Lol (If you want to reply, I'm AriSeptona. Too lazy to sign in. )) |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Shikamary? Interesting name. I didn't know Shikamaru got a sex change... |
![]() ![]() ![]() actually Itachi means weasel... |
![]() ![]() ![]() COO! |