Great story. I would really like some "bonus chapters".

The story started out with an honestly interesting premise and it is set up in a way that really piqued my curiosity.
Sadly, I found myself having to stop before I could really sink my teeth into it.
I came in hoping for a well written NaruKiba fic, which I thought it was from what I was reading, up until everyone else in konoha was given their own pairings and it kept unnecessarily moving focus away from the characters that the story was supposed to be about. I'm not trying to bash anyone for enjoying their own personal character ships, but it got really awkward for me with a lot of the pairing choices that were made. This was largely unnecessary.
It's a damn shame too, because I was really enjoying reading it up until things started losing focus like that. To put it bluntly, I think this would have greatly benefitted from keeping the ship focused on the characters as advertised and not arbitrarily made half of konoha a yaoi ship paradise.

One of the most hot lemon. And really touching relationship. Also very interesting view of the Inuzuka's power and clan.

Truly amazing story! Kind of hard to wrap my head around the fact that I read over a week what took 4 years to write! O_o Crazy cool

this IS the most kinaru I've read, and i must say me like.

Almost a decade late, but here I am. I was able to binge this amazing story within a couple days, you constantly amazed me with such descriptive language. You're writing style is beautiful, especially the naughty scenes :P Ahhhhh finally a AMAZING Kiba/Naruto story. Even though this story has been over for quite some time, finishing up the last chapter left a sad feeling in my heart. It was an amazing story, seeing it come to and end hurt me, but I was glad Kiba and Naruto got the happy ending the deserved. If you ever end up reading this, know that this story is the best thing I've ever read, period. Ive noticed your over-a-year long absence from this site, I hope you return to continue your works.

my my I love your stories I read so far 4 Naruto fanfic by you I loved it! nice job!

This just dawned on me that the last sintence sounds alout like the fox and the hound

I hate and love your cliffhangers. But I hate an love you and hate and love you agen for it. Very nice story by the way

I think that Narita used his rasengon on kiba. Also this chapter moved gust as soothingly as the prologue but with more action.

*cries on chapter 2*

I would like to let u know that this is in fact the only story that has has me in tears almost the whole time. I don't know what it was but seriously the tears wouldn't stop. Such a good story and I almost died when I thought kiba was dead. Very evil to end that particular chapter when you did. Overall though great story I really enjoyed it. Thank you so much for sharing!

I had plans today... and than I came to read your story. After being near tears nearly the whole time, I really had a snot and saline attack when I thought that Kiba died.
I still have that headache.
The story is cute, I love the pairing - even if Naruto is quite OOC, but it suits the storyline. Somehow I thought you would use Mimi and Hana as surrogate mothers. Mimi for Kibas children and Hana for Narutos. Hinata is not a bad option though...

What garbage. Dropped.

This should be called Hinata's Drama. 50% of it has little to do with Kiba or Naruto.