I really like this. You did a really great job with this, and I like how well you wrapped it up. I like the ending, although it's bittersweet.

You should write something in this universe from Mark's perspective. I think it would be interesting/fun to see how he and Legolas interact, or to see his reaction if/when he finds out the truth about Legolas and Aragorn. :)

mmmm it was really good

well done

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this is such a beautiful story - thank you so much for writing it :)
i got so excited with the last few chapters, it was gorgeous seeing all the elves reuniting in the dream world, and i was so hopeful that legolas would end up joining lauren - though i am glad it didnt happen the way i thought it would! if he had to live through the time in between it would have been very lonely and sad, so it was brilliant having him visit after living out his life more!

This was such a wonderful delight to read. I loved it so much! One of my favorites. The story is so beautiful and it makes me cry, though, in a good way.

Thank you so much. It was a pleasure to read.

Found this fic on my harddisk and decided to re-read it. Then download another copy for safeties sake. Love the story and happy to re-read it again. Good story.

Amazing story! I started reading it a few hours ago, and couldn't stop before I finished it :-)

That has to be one of the best stories I have ever read. EVER. I actually cannot thank you enough for posting this, it's truly a work of art.
You should write professionally if you're not already.
Much love to you, you literary genius!
Liz x

I LOVED this story! Truly enjoyed it! It was great as well to look through the modern world through different eyes like in this story. I'm glad to know that Lauren managed to make it through. I loved it!

AWWWWWHHHH! I LOVE this story! You are a wonderful writer.

that was a lovely story :)

omg i LOVED the ending. it was so good.

This is definately interesting. It shows promise, though a lot of that will depend on how well developed Lauren's personality is. I'm not just talking about her not being a Sue, either, but also if she's someone I think could exist. Like, does she act differently outside of her dreams, more shy, maybe.

OMG! GENERAL HAMMOND! Hehe. I love Stargate SG-1. Most amazing show. Anyway... this is one of the most amazing fics I have ever read. Real, quirky, and oh my gosh, a kiss from Legolas! What else does a good fanfic need? Seriously, I love this fic!