one of your best stories to date

Great story. Keep up the good work.

wow i read that and i knew basically nuthing about X23. im glad u rote it tho.. cuz now i understand her character alot better and il b able to read stories w/ her character in it. i really likd the story.. it wz extremely sobering to read even if mothers day wz such a long time ago.. haha can't wait till i get around to reading ur other stories. .haha.. im sure they'r great!

This was a very emotional one-shot. It was nice seeing X- I'm sorry, Sarah trying making amends with a part of her apst. And at last we know why Risman did what she did.

Very nice and touching. Good work. _

okay, it really is funny, the thought of the mighty Mayhem being afraid of Wolverine's claws... then again, who in their right mind would want Wolverine mad at them? The guy can take on the Hulk to a standstill! And I really, truely do like the idea of Sarah loving to read. The ending was very nicely done, too.

That was really great! Not my cup of tea, as I would have liked more drama and Debroah not being at all sorry for what she did, but then again I'm a cynical pessimist who has a dark view on life in general. It was great though! Well written and beautiful if you're one for the happy ending to stories like these.

*sniff* I promised myself I wouldn't cry... *sniff* but here I have tears in my eyes...

That was just... beautiful... for lack of a better word.

Hey, do I spot a reference to the comicverse X-23. Cunning move my friend...

Great work mate, loved it (as usual)

Fuzzy, signing off...

What a nice and touching scene between Sarah and her mother. I guess it would be natural for her to be curious about it, I was a little surprised that she actually asked someone for help. It was a nice little mother's day tribute, and the interaction between the two was very good. I think you got it right in this one because X-23 wouldn't welcome her with open arms but after spending times with the others might be willing to give it a try. Take it easy.

Very nice! I wondered why Risman had done that...and now I know. Now I wonder how Logan will react once he finds out Sarah visited her.

I have to say though, some of those first few paragraphs could use some more commas.

Whoa...What a powerful story! Like what you've done with Sarah. I wonder how Logan will take to this new development? Great story, very realstic.

This was very hearthrobing and lovely. Real stories that are for both life and fansty consites of rare moments of sweet and bitter. For life is a doubble edge sword. It ment to make you throub with pain and heal with enlightment and new understand on the life meaning. Powerful and earth shattering!

Nice fic my friend. Very appropriate for mother's day. And in the eyes of X23 and Deborah Riseman no doubt! Very cool. It's good to see them take this first step. It probably won't happen overnight, but I hope they can at least come to an understanding. They deserve as much.

However, I did have a few issues with how you handled Risemen's past. You made her seem too blame-free in my opinion. And also, there was a scientific reason why X23 turned out to be a girl. It's because they had a damaged Y-chromosome, not because Risemen wanted a girl. But that's just my understanding. I would have more prefered to have Rismen volenteer for this, but only start to feel the personal strain AFTER she was born. Having her as this person who lost the love of her life and wanted a child is sort of like trying to erase her misdeeds. And given who she was working for, I would have thought she'd have had a more amoral approach to her work before the project.

However, that's just my petty qualm. It was very heartfelt and profound and I enjoyed it, especially the end. This is a great addition to your ever growing library of fics and I applaud you for writing this! Keep up the great work man! Stay cool like you always do! Slickboy out.

This meeting was inevitable.

Vincent, Wes, Susan, and Clare would be the most discrete in this matter. Wanda would be the only other one who would be sympathetic to Sarah, if you consider Wanda's visit to Lorna's place and meeting Denise Dane. But I have to wonder if Simon would be as discrete.

Maybe you should have Logan or Sarah give Vince a light scratch in the medical area with Gale close-by. Solve the mystery once and for all.

Life? O-kay. If only the real thing were as easy as the board game...

You mean to say Paige's a little like Kitty in that they're always eavesdropping?

A pity there's no obedience school for dragons. Maybe Dr. Strange, Illyana, and their associates can do that. Dragons do sort of fall into the field of magic and mysticism.

Good precaution on Sarah's part, but since Fury had the mansion under surveillance, and through it learned about Sarah being there, you have to wonder if they followed Sarah.

Explaining things like this probably never are.

It would seem that Sarah's life wasn't the only one that was messed up from the entire ordeal.

You mean those colorful books were children's books and fairy tales, right?

Not a bad plan, but of course Logan and the other adults will have to be told about it.

You know what would be funny - Sarah going to Rogue and telling her to do the same thing with Mystique. That more or less happened in H&B, and looked what happened there. As for the only other mother/daughter relationship that can be placed in the same category as theirs - August and Selene - forget it.

A very touching and heartfelt conclusion. Wish my own mother were still alive so I could do that right now.

I know that the Hydra ship was destroyed in that episode, but I have to wonder if Lady Viper is still alive. I mean, as I recall, Omega Red and Gauntler were in her employ at the time. I don't recall if they were on the ship, but if they were, the fact that Omega Red is now with Magneto, and Gauntlet appeared in Enter Daytripper means they survived the explosion. Maybe they got to an escape pod or something before the big boom. That being the case, there's sound reasoning to question if Lady Viper died in the explosion. If she is, Sarah's going to be in a world of danger, and so would those close to her.

great story i like this story on how x23 and Deborah talk about their past it was sad and good at the same time. can't wait to see what you post next